Travers: Perhaps you'll favor us with a demonstration while we're here. Buffy: You mean, like, right now? 'Cause, already had my recommended daily dose of fights tonight.

'Potential'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Nutty - Jan 03, 2007 5:48:59 am PST #2914 of 10434
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

Nikita fidgeted and adjusted her black Armani two-piece Italian suit

1. Armani suits are all Italian. A dude name of Giorgio Armani does not come from Mongolia, you know.

Fashioned from a delicate crepe de chine, it brought forth the softness of the feminine form

2. Has this person ever seen the tidy, quasi-masculine shape of an Armani suit?

and the frilly peplum

3. Obviously not.

her almost invisible pearl studs sitting prettily In her earlobes

4. Not that close to invisible.

And that's just the clothes critique!


Matt the Bruins fan - Jan 03, 2007 6:26:03 am PST #2915 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand

the frilly peplum added the illusion of fun expected from a successful young woman.

Wearing a frilly peplum may indicate that a woman is a professional, but probably not in the sort of profession the author has in mind...


Theodosia - Jan 03, 2007 6:28:23 am PST #2916 of 10434
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

"The illusion of fun" -- so successful young women are expected to project an illusion of fun rather than fun itself. Interesting.


erikaj - Jan 03, 2007 9:09:06 am PST #2917 of 10434
Always Anti-fascist!

I can sort of picture the look she's after, but if it's not an Armani picture(recent Las Vegas exposure tells me nsm) it's best not to be quite so specific...more of a Chandler thing, like "Casual as she looked, she even smelled like money."(Not like a Chandler Bing thing like "My God, could you *be* more ignorant?" although that crossed my mind, too, I must confess.)


Nutty - Jan 03, 2007 9:16:36 am PST #2918 of 10434
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

The peplum effect, the only thing it brings to mind for me is that Italian woman in Matrix #2, wearing a latex white dress that was translucent enough to show her landing strip. The jacket had a peplum in the back, but all it did was make her ass look like a cuttlefish.

Not exactly the "illusion of fun" one is going for.


Emily - Jan 04, 2007 5:09:43 am PST #2919 of 10434
"In the equation E = mc⬧, c⬧ is a pretty big honking number." - Scola

Oh oh indeed.


Lee - Jan 04, 2007 10:09:29 am PST #2920 of 10434
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Dana, in the Old Natter, you were talking about new fandoms. Did you ever get around to/feel like watching Hustle?

(I didn't feel like waiting for new natter YAY posts to die down before asking.)


Dana - Jan 04, 2007 10:10:59 am PST #2921 of 10434
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

It's on the list, I swear. I have the discs you generously sent me. They're sitting right over there.


Lee - Jan 04, 2007 10:12:28 am PST #2922 of 10434
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

So no Hustle Slash for ita's birthday?

Oh well.


Lee - Jan 04, 2007 10:23:50 am PST #2923 of 10434
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

More seriously though, I sent it to you because I thought you would enjoy it (and write us slash).

If you never get around to it, ce la vie.