As did that sentence.
Doesn't matter that we took him off that boat, Shepherd, it's the place he's going to live from now on.
Mal ,'Bushwhacked'
Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?
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erikaj - Dec 15, 2005 3:27:00 pm PST #1526 of 10434
Always Anti-fascist!
Michele T. - Dec 15, 2005 3:54:08 pm PST #1527 of 10434
with a gleam in my eye, and an almost airtight alibi
"Surreally factual" is my new favorite phrase EVAR.
Dana - Dec 15, 2005 4:00:34 pm PST #1528 of 10434
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
I believe this bit comes in between the "It's a Wonderful Life"-type dream, and the part where she sees the ghost of a woman who was Michael's wife in another lifetime, so...things do start to seem surrealy factual by that point.
Anne W. - Dec 15, 2005 6:22:05 pm PST #1529 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
The draft of my Yuletide story is done. Now all I need to do is remove all the suck.
Betsy HP - Dec 16, 2005 8:36:17 am PST #1530 of 10434
If I only had a brain...
Oh, would that life were that easy.
Deena - Dec 16, 2005 10:24:16 am PST #1531 of 10434
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
There was no suck!
Betsy HP - Dec 16, 2005 11:30:01 am PST #1532 of 10434
If I only had a brain...
The thing is, in my first drafts? You remove the suck and what you have left is fishing net.
Anne W. - Dec 16, 2005 12:17:43 pm PST #1533 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
There was no suck!
You have no idea how relieved I am to hear that.
With my first drafts, I usually end up keeping about 75% of what's there, but what's there almost always winds up getting rearranged.
Dana - Dec 16, 2005 12:55:04 pm PST #1534 of 10434
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
Ha. Draft.
Theodosia - Dec 16, 2005 2:47:33 pm PST #1535 of 10434
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"
Mostly I just move around the suck, sweeping it into the metaphorical corners and under the rug.