One of my critique partners is trying to talk me out of using "cock" in my wip. She thinks it's too coarse for the tone of the story. I'm pretty sure it's what a guy like my hero would call it, so I'm sticking to my guns so far.
We knocked 'em deader!
Willow ,'Lies My Parents Told Me'
Spike's Bitches 23: We've mastered the power of positive giving up.
[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risque (and frisque), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.
Susan W. - Apr 13, 2005 4:25:13 pm PDT #3290 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Cashmere - Apr 13, 2005 4:28:14 pm PDT #3291 of 10001
Now tagless for your comfort.
so I'm sticking to my guns so far.
Stick to your guns in regards to his gun. I prefer "cock", too. Lots of hard consonants.
OWEN SIGNED HIS FIRST WORD TO ME TONIGHT!
§ ita § - Apr 13, 2005 4:29:00 pm PDT #3292 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
OWEN SIGNED HIS FIRST WORD TO ME TONIGHT!
I guess signing can't have hard consonants, so my first worry is somewhat alleviated.
§ ita § - Apr 13, 2005 4:29:17 pm PDT #3293 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
However, whatever the word was -- way cool.
Cashmere - Apr 13, 2005 4:33:00 pm PDT #3294 of 10001
Now tagless for your comfort.
It was "milk", ita.
Talk about needing some segueway there.
Trudy Booth - Apr 13, 2005 4:33:57 pm PDT #3295 of 10001
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart
Cash, that is so exciting.
Cashmere - Apr 13, 2005 4:34:51 pm PDT #3296 of 10001
Now tagless for your comfort.
It's very exciting considering I've been signing to him for two months with nothing. But I was warned it takes a loooooong time for some babies to pick up.
Trudy Booth - Apr 13, 2005 4:38:33 pm PDT #3297 of 10001
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart
He gets words and how to use them. His whole world just changed. I'm tearing up.
Aims - Apr 13, 2005 4:39:04 pm PDT #3298 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.
YYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY OWEN!!
Trudy Booth - Apr 13, 2005 4:39:52 pm PDT #3299 of 10001
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart
Clevery little fiance Emma has there, huh?