Do I wish I was somebody else right now. Somebody not... married, not madly in love with a beautiful woman who can kill me with her pinkie!

Wash ,'Our Mrs. Reynolds'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Dana - Sep 13, 2007 11:00:09 am PDT #9374 of 10001
"I'm useless alone." // "We're all useless alone. It's a good thing you're not alone."

Graceful and flamboyant bat designs that are sure to appeal to Goths, Deathrockers, emo scene kids, and others of a dark and whimsical nature.

I would take out "that" in order to make it a complete sentence.

t been proofreading for hours now, documents not going away no matter how hard I wish...


Karl - Sep 14, 2007 1:07:51 am PDT #9375 of 10001
I adore all you motherfuckers so much -- PMM.

A day off (100 words):

That day, I remember distinctly thinking, "I should appreciate this view and this office now, because I might not always have it."

And sure enough, by five o'clock, I didn't. Some part of me undoubtedly knew what was coming.

I had dinner that evening with my father and his wife, for the first time in five years. It was the most companionable, gentle, and even-tempered visit we have ever had together.

"Just as well," I said as he suggested a full day's excursion into the city. "I'd forgotten to request the day off tomorrow." Only then did it hit home.

Bruises (100 words):

Abusive relationships don't always leave bruises. My mother made sure I knew that much; the women she brought to our house from the shelter (in the days before our house /was/ the shelter) were largely unmarked, though by no means unscathed.

But I keep expecting to see welts — big, red, angry marks — every time I look at a copy of a sacred document, whether it be the Constitution, the Declaration of Independence, the Bible, the Torah, or the Koran.

The pages remain unmarked, unbruised. And now I understand a bit of Christian iconography a little better than I wanted to.


Beverly - Sep 14, 2007 7:11:29 am PDT #9376 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Lovely language, Karl. And poignant vignettes.


erikaj - Sep 14, 2007 8:09:12 am PDT #9377 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

The second one killed me. I think I type well for a corpse, though.


erikaj - Sep 14, 2007 8:30:18 am PDT #9378 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

My humble effort:

Before I start this story, I feel that I should tell you, I'm 19th century pale, like to read in bed, and am uncoordinated. Bruising is a part of my life. But it happens every few months or so...someone inspects some part of me...trying hard to sound friendly and jokey. "Oh, Erika...where'd you get that big bruise?"

Maybe I have no idea. Maybe I don't want to say that I sneezed hard and brought my keyboard clattering on my thigh. I consider saying "You should see what the other guy looked like," but people who spend so much time being concerned have no sense of humor.

I don't know what to think when so many people picture me getting beat up.


Karl - Sep 14, 2007 8:41:38 am PDT #9379 of 10001
I adore all you motherfuckers so much -- PMM.

but people who spend so much time being concerned have no sense of humor

This makes my teeth itch. In a sympathetic sort of way.


SailAweigh - Sep 14, 2007 5:36:33 pm PDT #9380 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Good stuff, you guys. I love seeing what comes out of everbody's heads. Spicy.


Zenkitty - Sep 15, 2007 7:14:55 am PDT #9381 of 10001
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.

Good stuff, all. Karl, I especially liked your 2nd.


Amy - Sep 17, 2007 4:46:17 pm PDT #9382 of 10001
Because books.

No new topic? How about ... haunted?


SailAweigh - Sep 18, 2007 3:09:47 pm PDT #9383 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Haunted

I can see him sitting in the comfy chair. He’s got his legs hanging over one arm, back propped against the opposite arm. There’s a book held open with three fingers behind the spine while the thumb and little finger anchor the pages. His right hand is running over his hair: front to back, back to front, twirls a cowlick. He doesn’t look up as I enter the room. Our family is famous for our ability to tune the world out when in the throes of a word feeding frenzy. He’s tuned me out completely, for the past 21 years.