You turned evil a lot faster than I thought you would.

Angel ,'Just Rewards (2)'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Sep 14, 2007 8:09:12 am PDT #9377 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

The second one killed me. I think I type well for a corpse, though.


erikaj - Sep 14, 2007 8:30:18 am PDT #9378 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

My humble effort:

Before I start this story, I feel that I should tell you, I'm 19th century pale, like to read in bed, and am uncoordinated. Bruising is a part of my life. But it happens every few months or so...someone inspects some part of me...trying hard to sound friendly and jokey. "Oh, Erika...where'd you get that big bruise?"

Maybe I have no idea. Maybe I don't want to say that I sneezed hard and brought my keyboard clattering on my thigh. I consider saying "You should see what the other guy looked like," but people who spend so much time being concerned have no sense of humor.

I don't know what to think when so many people picture me getting beat up.


Karl - Sep 14, 2007 8:41:38 am PDT #9379 of 10001
I adore all you motherfuckers so much -- PMM.

but people who spend so much time being concerned have no sense of humor

This makes my teeth itch. In a sympathetic sort of way.


SailAweigh - Sep 14, 2007 5:36:33 pm PDT #9380 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Good stuff, you guys. I love seeing what comes out of everbody's heads. Spicy.


Zenkitty - Sep 15, 2007 7:14:55 am PDT #9381 of 10001
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.

Good stuff, all. Karl, I especially liked your 2nd.


Amy - Sep 17, 2007 4:46:17 pm PDT #9382 of 10001
Because books.

No new topic? How about ... haunted?


SailAweigh - Sep 18, 2007 3:09:47 pm PDT #9383 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Haunted

I can see him sitting in the comfy chair. He’s got his legs hanging over one arm, back propped against the opposite arm. There’s a book held open with three fingers behind the spine while the thumb and little finger anchor the pages. His right hand is running over his hair: front to back, back to front, twirls a cowlick. He doesn’t look up as I enter the room. Our family is famous for our ability to tune the world out when in the throes of a word feeding frenzy. He’s tuned me out completely, for the past 21 years.


Atropa - Sep 28, 2007 8:35:15 pm PDT #9384 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Wheeeee! Nice Agent Lady got back to me about my proposal! She said it was in fantastic shape, and that I just needed to do a few formatting tweaks. (Holy crap, no re-writing!)

She also said that she's been getting a pretty good number of requests for my proposal thanks to the blurb about it she put in the newsletter the agency sends out to publishers. I have no idea what a pretty good number is, but I'm giddy at the notion.


Liese S. - Sep 28, 2007 8:55:28 pm PDT #9385 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Whohooo! Go, Jilli! Countdown to Jilli Rock Stardom begins now!


-t - Sep 29, 2007 5:08:14 am PDT #9386 of 10001
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Indeed! Wonderful and not at all surprising news, Jilli!