I'd love to be able to chalk this up to my CPs using a romance standard for a non-romance story, but that might be a cop-out.
Or you might be right!
You know, some people just don't like sex scenes if they're not followed by true love and marriage, and some people just don't like them at all. The curtain should always be tastefully drawn after the passionate kiss.
Me, I like sex scenes. Clearly, you should let me read it and decide.
Zenkitty, I'd be happy to send it to you for a second opinion, but you might be disappointed--it's quite tame. PG, maybe PG-13. The only person I know who'd be shocked by it is my mother.
Send it on, then - profile addy is good.
Insent, Zenkitty--thanks!
Reading now, Susan. I'm into it, it's good. I may be making more notes than you wanted, though. me = OCD.
Susan, insent back at'cha.
I don't seem to have the knack for issuing drabble challenges, so passing the match on to whoever wants to take it up, in hopes they will use it to light a torch.
It's not you, it's me.
Haven't got drabble -fu lately.
I did one and it came out all weird. I've been meaning to try again but I went out of town.
Drabble topic for 8/27: On the Bus