Played with Kaylee. Sun came out, and I walked on my feet and heard with my ears. I ate the bits, the bits stayed down, and I work. I function like I'm a girl. I hate it because I know it'll go away. The sun goes dark and chaos has come again. Bits. Fluids. What am I?!

River ,'War Stories'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - Jan 02, 2007 9:37:59 am PST #8791 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Mixed:

George Monbiot's "Heat: How to Stop the Planet from Burning" is a brilliant, flawed and deeply important look at what it will take to slow global warming below a catastrophic level;

about another paragraph on the "brilliant" , 1,800 words or so on the flaws and then conclude

Does missing alternatives such as this, along with actual errors lower the value of Monbiot's work on this issue?

Heat remains one of the most important books of the decade. For works of this nature, serious errors are not only unavoidable, but necessary and productive. An initial proposal covering the transformation of an entire society cannot possibly get everything right. Nobody is an expert in everything. In sifting out truth from morass after morass of conflicting claims, in separating important facts from both deliberate deceptions and honest errors - nobody could avoid missing something.

The best you can hope for is to be generally right, to let facts trump ideology and wishful thinking, to be as accurate as one person can in such matters. Then let feedback and criticism correct errors and refine answers; essentially apply the scientific method to popular discourse. Monbiot has performed the invaluable service of starting the process. More, he has glimpsed the beginning of what needs to be done politically. (Generally second steps in politics only become apparent after the first step is taken.) His case for working through existing environmental and climate justice groups to build the politics of a low carbon future is compelling.


Allyson - Jan 02, 2007 9:39:23 am PST #8792 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Back. Just caught up with email. Now to phone messages. Eep.


Amy - Jan 02, 2007 10:00:30 am PST #8793 of 10001
Because books.

Welcome back, Allyson!

Typo, will the review be right there in the body of the email?

I think "brilliant" outweighs "flawed," but I think they're also crucial opinions for the review. I'd just send it along and see what happens. Trying to second-guess what an editor's going to think is a no-win game, anyway.


Typo Boy - Jan 02, 2007 10:27:31 am PST #8794 of 10001
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Yeah, I think you are right. They welcome unsolicited queries, but not unsolicited full content.

And welcome back Allyson!


Amy - Jan 03, 2007 10:16:22 am PST #8795 of 10001
Because books.

Ugh. I have to write jacket copy again today. The heroine? A Lycanthrope Queen (which apparently means a kind of cat person in this universe) named Siena (unrelated to the other female character in this series named Cinnamon). And she's a virgin. Of course. And she's tawny and gold and cat-featured and ...

I think I just threw up in my mouth a little.


Astarte - Jan 03, 2007 10:19:48 am PST #8796 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Here KittySue, here Kittysue.


Steph L. - Jan 03, 2007 10:21:32 am PST #8797 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe

AmyLiz, is that *really* worse than BIG SPANKABLE ASSES?

(Also, I should be going to the Post Office tomorrow, so I'll mail Carrie's Story to you then.)


juliana - Jan 03, 2007 10:22:55 am PST #8798 of 10001
I’d be lying if I didn’t say that I miss them all tonight…

The heroine? A Lycanthrope Queen (which apparently means a kind of cat person in this universe) named Siena

Are they unclear on what exactly lycanthropy means?? Derived from "lycos", meaning wolf! Oy vey.

(unrelated to the other female character in this series named Cinnamon).

This is the one that made all the baby gods in all the baby pantheons cry, right? (Except for Zeus, b/c he's a slut like that....)

sends gallons of Fernet to AmyLiz


Amy - Jan 03, 2007 10:25:25 am PST #8799 of 10001
Because books.

Well, no, it's not worse than Big Spankable Asses. Although in the end, I don't know if I mentioned it, there was precious little actual *spanking* in the goddamn book. Made focusing on tender pink asses a bit tough when writing the copy...

And thanks! I'll keep my eyes out for it.

This is the one that made all the baby gods in all the baby pantheons cry, right? (Except for Zeus, b/c he's a slut like that....)

Uh huh. And only the third in a series of SEVEN. And I'm pretty sure I'll be doing the copy for all of them.

::swigs Fernet too fast. passes out::

::doesn't mind at all::


Volans - Jan 03, 2007 10:29:35 am PST #8800 of 10001
move out and draw fire

Fernet is the only rational choice, AL. And besides, will help with the jacket copy.