Show, Don't Tell drabble:

At home, he emptied his pockets on the table inside the door. Out came his keys, on a plain ring with a white plastic tag. From his side pocket, loose change and a tube of Certs. From his back pocket came his wallet, worn black leather holding only his driver’s license, his library and credit cards, and a few bills. He withdrew his gun from its aging holster and his badge from his shirt pocket, laying them beside a carefully framed photo of a little girl about five, frozen mid-swing, curls flying, her grin as wide as the sky.

cereal drabbling...

This is connected to the first one -- it came out of nowhere when I was done. I'm whitefonting it in case some of you don't want to read it.

Show, Don't Tell drabble #2

“Items on the deceased?”

“Not much. She was wearing clean jeans, a red sweater. There was a sticker on her sweater—‘Clean Teeth Club,’ it said. Barbie underwear. Good sneakers—they look new—and white socks. Her hair was clean before…well, before, and she had two red, heart-shaped barrettes in it. Nails trimmed neatly. There was a RingPop in one pocket and a silver heart locket on a chain around her neck. A bear was found with her—it has a pink ribbon around its neck and what looks like a pink infant’s T-shirt on. Looks like an old friend.”

Oh Amy. Oh.

“Just a sec.”

She grabbed a softsided sixpack cooler from the front footwell. The lid was tucked inside it, along with a pack of those round drumhead window sunshades, a pack of stick-on mesh sun screens, a collapsible umbrella and a windshield ice-scraper stood upright, a tub of wet-wipes, a slim box of tissues, a notebook with a pen looped in the spiraled wire binding, a tire gauge, and a couple of maps. A pair of utility gloves hung over one side, allover plastic-dotted like the feet of toddler pjs. She put the cooler in back with the folded blanket. He got in.

Thanks, Bev!

Yours is fascinating. I'm still puzzling it out. Such wonderful detail.

Just a female Indiana Jones with a car. Beee prepared. (sorry. Aladdin moment there)

Absent-Minded

"Damn!"

The contents of Ringan's pockets sat on the table, mocking him, a jumble of frustration. Keys to Lumbe's. Keys to the Alfa. Spare keys to Penny's Jaguar. One broken guitar string, Martin .0042 gauge, neatly coiled. Enough guitar picks to stock the Cropredy Festival.

"Come on, where are you..."

Jacket, emptied out: Nothing but music store business cards. Bloody hell. They couldn't be lost. She'd have his guts for garters.

"Looking for these?"

He turned. Penny, watching from the doorway, jangled her own front door keys.

"Oh, good. Not lost. Where were they?"

"Where you left them. In the lock."

Show, Don't Tell drabble #3: (I love this topic, too.)

My mom's dresser.

Paperbacks, three or four, bookmarks sticking out like tongues. A bottle of Chanel #5, nearly empty. A basket of makeup—a pink and green tube of Maybelline mascara, nail polish in rich, earthy shades of wine and burgundy. Her jewelry box, cheap white board edged with fading gilt, and in its bottom drawer a small velvet bag of baby teeth and curling locks of pale hair. Pill bottles, fat and thin, an army of translucent amber plastic topped with childproof white caps. Sunglasses, hand cream, a stack of flesh-colored nylon panties. Photos of her children tucked into the mirror’s frame.

Hmmmmm. Did I screw up? I mean, does actually having a scene using said objects violate the spirit of the drabble? Tep? Could you clarify?

6 lipsticks, 2 glosses, all in the same family of pink. An inhaler lives in detente with two packs of clove cigarettes and an empty book of matches. Enough bits of paper to line a large rats' nest litters the bottoms of this structured black bag, along with two highlighters and a dead red pen. An anemic peanut-sized penis pencil topper hides under all the paper debris like a dirty secret, and fine purple powder from an exploded eye shadow coats the fingers of anyone brave enough to dare the bag.

A bottle of iburpofen large enough for most third-world health clinics clinks and rattles alongside a keychain heavy enough to use as a weapon, and a lone crusty Tictac is the last survivor fleeing from the train wreck that is my purse.