Whatever happened to the still beating heart of a virgin? No one has any standards anymore.

Giles ,'Lies My Parents Told Me'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Amy - Mar 14, 2005 11:25:31 am PST #563 of 10001
Because books.

Man, these are fan-fucking-tastic today. Awesome drabble, Tep. I'm still trying to decide which photo to do first, and madly trying to keep up with comments in LJ, and I can't.

Off to find a quiet place where the baby can't find me (oh, stop, just for a minute -- sheesh) and think.


Beverly - Mar 14, 2005 11:29:56 am PST #564 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Photo #7

He looked wonderfully well, and Roger wanted nothing more than to hold him close. But he contented himself with sitting next to him as they talked, and was overjoyed that Charles didn’t move away from his touch—in fact he seemed to draw a little strength and courage from it. There was none of the pallor there had been before, obviously they were seeing that he got outside occasionally. They talked of inconsequentialities, Charles making less of an obvious effort as the afternoon wore on. Roger's heart turned over in his chest. If only the attendant would look away, he might risk stealing a kiss.

I don't know who "Charles" is, but he seems to belong in my drabbles today.


Connie Neil - Mar 14, 2005 12:04:29 pm PST #565 of 10001
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t the writing next to Photo 1 is a bit of verse. I ran it through an online Polish translator. I didn't get a full translation, but I got enough. Thank god no one asks why I cry at my computer

Beloved Stasi, in token of remembrance

In later years, when people asked where she was, it was sufficient to say, "She died during . . ." People nodded and asked no more. They had names of their own, who had been lost during.

They'd been happy, those days in Venice. War was ended, there would be no more war. The news from reparations-battered Germany would come to nothing. They knew it was lies, but happy days in Venice were only possible on a sea of lies.

Beloved Stasi, whose memory lived among tombs and photographs, never lost as long as someone knew her name.


Amy - Mar 14, 2005 12:12:24 pm PST #566 of 10001
Because books.

Photo 4

She never believed me when I told her she was beautiful.

“Beauty is for girls. And those great paintings you love so much.” A pretty face didn’t put food on the table, or wash the clothes. Beauty was a luxury, and the only luxury she wanted was more time.

I couldn’t convince her that strength and patience and sacrifice had made her face more captivating as the years went by. That love had written itself into her features, until the only thing I saw when I stepped behind the camera was the most beautiful woman in the world.


SailAweigh - Mar 14, 2005 1:26:59 pm PST #567 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Amy, that was wonderful.

With so many pictures to choose from and so many good drabbles already posted, it's going to be hard to come up with anything more on my part. I need to go sit and devise a new torture.


SailAweigh - Mar 14, 2005 2:21:05 pm PST #568 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Torture has been achieved.

Photo #6.

The Archaeologist

I wasn’t in long pants, yet. Those were reserved for Bob. He’d started wearing them two summers earlier. A year later, he went off to Oxford.

“I’m going to become the world’s greatest archaeologist,” he boasted.

I believed him. We’d spent summers digging up abandoned compost heaps in the backyard, getting grass stains on our knickers. Mother would complain about the cost of keeping us in worsted.

Yesterday, we received a telegram from the War Office along with a fancy medal in a box. Three months in the army and his convoy was blown up in the evacuation of Gaza.


deborah grabien - Mar 14, 2005 3:39:12 pm PST #569 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

You people are killing me with these. Sail, here's a spooky bit of synchronicity for you - I'd looked at that one and thought, hmmmm, Indiana Jones...? Young Indy?


SailAweigh - Mar 14, 2005 4:18:13 pm PST #570 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I just finished reading "The Egyptologist" by Arthur Philips. It inspired me.


Susan W. - Mar 14, 2005 7:42:44 pm PST #571 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

t dances into the thread

They liked my love scene! They liked my love scene!

OK, it was just a kissing scene, but a hot one. At least, it was meant to be hot, but I wasn't sure it actually was, because I don't yet have confidence in my ability to get Teh Sexy from my brain onto the page. So I was afraid it was too clinical or too cliche or too much or not enough or something. But they liked it! One group member, J (female) suggested I tone down one part that she thought was too much too soon, and A (male) said, "The upper half of my body agrees with you, but the lower half likes the way it's written."

t bounce bounce bounce


deborah grabien - Mar 14, 2005 7:44:57 pm PST #572 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Bwah!

That's some good commentary there. I like A.