Lorne: Once the word spreads you beat up an innocent old man, well, the truly terrible will think twice before going toe-to-toe with our Avenging Angel. Spike: Yes. The geriatric community will be soiling their nappies when they hear you're on the case. Bravo.

'The Cautionary Tale of Numero Cinco'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Allyson - Jan 12, 2006 7:16:28 pm PST #5174 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

That's the answer I just got from someone else, Connie, and it makes perfect sense, of course. First time author and all. I had given her 8 of 12 complete, so I'm hoping that it's a postive sign that she liked what she read well enough to ask for the rest.

I just never heard of it with non-fic and am toggling between thinking I'm on shaky ground and thinking it's a good sign.


deborah grabien - Jan 12, 2006 7:44:51 pm PST #5175 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Allyson, not a non-fiction writer, but I honestly can't come up with a single good reason why she'd want to see four more essays if she hadn't liked the first eight.


deborah grabien - Jan 13, 2006 1:47:31 pm PST #5176 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nothing to do with the drabble topic. A villanelle.

whatever

If you should see me on that dark highway
Feel free to slap some life into my face:
whisper the words my soul demands I say.

I love you. Wait, what's that? Too bad, you say;
You're just the rainbow I'm condemned to chase
If you should see me on that dark highway?

This history, this pointless game we play
Mementos of my only shot at grace
Whisper the words my soul demands I say.

I'd give the world, give anything, to stay
Rescind goodbye: please let me state my case
If you should see me on that dark highway.

So I'll keep walking, walk until I'm grey
I've lost the one thing no one can replace
Whisper the words my soul demands I say.

Ah, well - you never loved me anyway
So there's the truth, grafittied at the base
If you should see me on that dark highway
Whisper the words my soul demands I say....


Consuela - Jan 13, 2006 3:17:24 pm PST #5177 of 10001
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

I'm not here much, but I wanted to let you know I'm cheering for you, Allyson!

t waves pom-poms


Allyson - Jan 14, 2006 5:32:26 pm PST #5178 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Anyone around to beta 2800 words of poop?


erikaj - Jan 14, 2006 5:40:19 pm PST #5179 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I could do it...


Allyson - Jan 14, 2006 5:43:03 pm PST #5180 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Profile addie?


erikaj - Jan 14, 2006 5:47:48 pm PST #5181 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yeah...


Allyson - Jan 14, 2006 5:48:35 pm PST #5182 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

insent!


erikaj - Jan 14, 2006 6:38:50 pm PST #5183 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Backflung...it wasn't that hard. Most pleasant beta experience I've had in some time. Thanks. (Of course, some of them have made the baby Jesus cry, but don't let that take away from your talent.)