Wow, Erika. That's amazing.
Yes. Lucky for you, people may be in danger.
Buffy ,'Him'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
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Deena - Nov 04, 2005 9:35:49 am PST #4790 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
erikaj - Nov 04, 2005 9:36:43 am PST #4791 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Thank you.
deborah grabien - Nov 04, 2005 9:59:31 am PST #4792 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
(I got the "pretty" ones, he ate the rejects)
And your eyes were way better than his were.
erikaj - Nov 04, 2005 10:11:44 am PST #4793 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Yeah, I think so. Now he's a divorced prison guard living with his mama and no fun anymore.
Connie Neil - Nov 04, 2005 10:21:14 am PST #4794 of 10001
brillig
my take on the drabble
It was the late 60s. I knew nothing of life beyond the hills I was born in. Walter Cronkite stood next to a chalkboard and used unfamiliar words like Viet Cong and casualties.
The church gave us Trick or Treat for Unicef boxes, telling us it would help kids like us in other parts of the world. We went out, glad to help.
The people opening their doors lost their smiles, gave us candy but no coins. A woman pulled us in, sat us down in her living room, and told us that Unicef was a front for bad people and that the money would go to someone called Communists. Then she smiled, gave us candy, and sent us on our way.
I miss the hills. I don't miss the people.
Deena - Nov 04, 2005 10:22:10 am PST #4795 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Dear Lord, that gave me shivers.
Connie Neil - Nov 04, 2005 10:25:46 am PST #4796 of 10001
brillig
I want to show Hubby the color I think of as green, not this yellowy green they have in Utah. But I have no interest in interacting much with the people.
erikaj - Nov 04, 2005 11:24:38 am PST #4797 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Wow, Connie, I could really relate. Not, like, note for note, but...
Anne W. - Nov 06, 2005 6:40:23 am PST #4798 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
These drabbles are all amazing. Connie's gave me a chill, and Erika's put me into a thoughtful mood for a long, long time.
deborah grabien - Nov 06, 2005 8:04:34 am PST #4799 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Question for my London Calling WIP readers, specifically:
Having had JP give Patrick Ormand the basics of the firebombing, the dead bodyguard, the obvious, not-bothering-to-hide-it planting of evidence by the inspector from the Cannes police, and Bree and Dom's arrest in the prologue, should I do the entire scene from JP's eyes in chapter six?
I'm thinking yes. But opinions are of the good.