I'm not evil again. Why does everyone think that?

Angel ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Astarte - Oct 30, 2005 5:06:32 pm PST #4758 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

A drabble for the mask theme:

I’m a body on a gurney, waiting my turn in the hall outside a busy triage.

The usual fictions don’t apply here. I’m below the masks now- scraped down to essentials- literally without a leg to stand on.

Nobody ever died of patellar arrest, and my cell phone signal won’t connect. Too busy to help me replace my shattered mask.

So me and my blown out tendon commune with the ice pack that’s turned into warmish slush. I whisper prayers and promises and wonder is the day that the fears I’ve hidden behind my stylish facade wardrobe bloom into undeniable flesh.


JZ - Oct 31, 2005 11:16:20 am PST #4759 of 10001
See? I gave everybody here an opportunity to tell me what a bad person I am and nobody did, because I fuckin' rule.

What might a Southern woman in the mid-fifties wear that would make people around think she's Not Quite A Nice Girl? Not a hooker, just, like...forward? Bright lipstick, too much perfume, pants in public? She's a city woman, if that helps.

I just checked with my mom, who was in high school in the 50s -- she said her recollection, for both teens and grown-ups, was that there was, unsurprisingly, lots and lots and LOTS of conformity, and so there wouldn't be much visually to give you a clue. It was all pretty subtle. A sweater or skirt just a bit too tight. Hair not just dyed blonde, but bleached. For high school girls, chewing gum in class and smoking anywhere on school grounds. And attitude -- not appearing to seek everyone else's approval, or even care about it one way or the other.

But mostly, my mom said, because everyone looked and dressed so much alike, it was gossip. Fast women got smugly gossiped about by the guys who nailed them (or claimed to have), who let their friends and younger brothers in on it, who told their sisters and moms, who whispered behind their hands whenever She walked by, whether or not the guy who started it was telling anything resembling the truth.


erikaj - Oct 31, 2005 11:26:21 am PST #4760 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

So some jerkwad you said "No, thanks," to, could make up this whole fantasy world and wreck *your* life just cause he felt like it? D'oh. Stupid double standard. (Not that that will happen in my story...that character *has* actually done a bit of carrying-on as I envision her, but I guess that is why older women tell me so often that my mouth will get me in trouble.)


Beverly - Oct 31, 2005 12:35:05 pm PST #4761 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Ro, that's an amazing drabble. Must think about it more.


Astarte - Oct 31, 2005 2:58:30 pm PST #4762 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Thanks, Beverly.

Felt a bit lumpy, but it's giving me some things to think on for future, so that's a reasonable ROI for a hundred words.


deborah grabien - Oct 31, 2005 6:55:59 pm PST #4763 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

No new topic?


Amy - Nov 01, 2005 10:02:15 am PST #4764 of 10001
Because books.

Tep? I feel a need to drabble, and I completely blanked on masks. You want some possibilities?


Steph L. - Nov 01, 2005 11:52:38 am PST #4765 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Oh, dear god. Sorry! No, I have a topic. Give me a minute....


Steph L. - Nov 01, 2005 11:55:15 am PST #4766 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Challenge #81 (masks) is now closed.

Challenge #82, also in the spirit of the season, is trick[s] and/or treat[s].


deborah grabien - Nov 01, 2005 12:26:37 pm PST #4767 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oooooooooooooooooooh!

Probably not until tomorrow (out of town for five days=GAH! SHIT PILED UP!), but I like this challenge, I do.