You know, I just... I woke up, and I looked in the mirror, and I thought, hey, what's with all the sin? I need to change. I'm... I'm dirty. I'm, I'm bad with the... sex and the envy and that, that loud music us kids listen to nowadays.

Buffy ,'Lessons'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


sumi - Sep 22, 2005 4:48:26 am PDT #4187 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

Deb! Matty Groves is on it's way to me already! I am surprised as I didn't think it was coming out 'til October.


Nutty - Sep 22, 2005 5:04:18 am PDT #4188 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

So of course, I wrote "God, Simon, what did you show me this thing for?"
And had dear old Uncle Dave say "You like the realism right?"
And I say "Yes."
"Well, that's the price you pay then."

I think you can't do that in a romance, though; historicist detail notwitstanding, romances are not big on the random beatdowns of life, you know? I don't think I've ever read a romance where at the end, the two characters just realize they aren't very alike, and break up amicably, and move on. Much less one where the female lead is hit by a garbage truck ten pages from the end, and dies.

I suppose it could happen, but I bet a lot of the audience would protest that it wasn't a romance. (That is to say, I find both propositions, as well as realism overall, interesting, but the general/loyal readership of Harlequin, probably not what they're in the mood for when they pick up that paperback.)

And can I spare an Amen for whoever coined the phrase "the random beatdowns of life"? It expresses so efficiently a complete worldview.


deborah grabien - Sep 22, 2005 5:49:35 am PDT #4189 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

It expresses so efficiently a complete worldview.

It really does.


Lyra Jane - Sep 22, 2005 5:58:04 am PDT #4190 of 10001
Up with the sun

would you be completely turned off if the victim was a nice older woman (actually a children's book author) whom everyone in town loved?

I wouldn't, though I see what Susan is saying if the murder is late in the book -- it's that feeling of letdown you get when a character you really like leaves a TV show. But other than that, I agree that the victim being nice adds interest.

I briefly dated a guy in college who was doing his best at being eccentric, part of which included wearing tailored suits as often as he could get away with it. He paired them with oxblood Doc Martens, and it made me wibble at 19.


deborah grabien - Sep 22, 2005 7:29:09 am PDT #4191 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

He paired them with oxblood Doc Martens, and it made me wibble at 19.

I remember when Paula Coles was backing up Peter Gabriel; she wore an Armani ankle-length dress and Docs. She looked AMAZING.


erikaj - Sep 22, 2005 7:31:04 am PDT #4192 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Oh, Nutty, I totally meant that for the "Nice litle old lady gets capped anyway," conversation. I may be a little crazy, but not completely. I specifically thought about murder mysteries. Was it not supposed to be one? Were we thinking more of a Crusie thing with a murder as a plot element, but not really about murders? Because those people are always a little...tarnished, in some way...yeah.


SailAweigh - Sep 22, 2005 8:51:52 am PDT #4193 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

It's All in the Follow Through

Bright lights glared off stainless steel and ceramic tiles, making it hard to see things happening around me. But I could feel them. After 13 hours of labor, rubbery hands smoothed cleanser on my belly to finish shaving it. It might have been 80 º in the operating room, but my beached-whale body shivered at the exposure. Deliriously, I wondered as they pulled crosspieces out from the table to strap my arms to if this was what being crucified felt like? I voiced my thoughts out loud, “There is no joy in Mudville, tonight; the Mighty Casey has struck out.”


Aims - Sep 22, 2005 9:04:02 am PDT #4194 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

Um...say one had a cousin that just published her first novel and one wanted to sort of pimp it to other writers, would it be considered gauche to post the Amazon link to one's cousin's book in here?


deborah grabien - Sep 22, 2005 9:04:14 am PDT #4195 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeouch, Sail.


deborah grabien - Sep 22, 2005 9:04:45 am PDT #4196 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Aimee, hell no. Or you could do it in Beep Me - Betsy just did.