A ghost? What's the deal? Is every frat on this campus haunted? And if so, why do people keep coming to these parties, cause it's not the snacks.

Xander ,'Dirty Girls'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Pix - Mar 02, 2005 9:26:47 am PST #349 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Deb, so sweet and sad.

Thanks for the tag, Erika! I adore it. I may keep it for a long long time.

Victor, I like the new poem.


erikaj - Mar 02, 2005 9:37:28 am PST #350 of 10001
I'm a fucking amazing catch!--Fiona Gallagher, Shameless(US)

You wrote that last night, Victor? OK, another reason to be a Victor fangirl.


Pix - Mar 02, 2005 9:41:04 am PST #351 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Oh Ginger, I just read yours. I love it. The first sentence really just says it, don't you think?


victor infante - Mar 02, 2005 9:55:45 am PST #352 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Thanks, Erika and Kristin. Yeah, the "Written Right Now" contest is weekly at the Frantic Rabbit reading, here in Worcester. The host, Gary, presents a strange-ass prize, and everybody has ten minutes to write a poem about it. Hopefully, Thessaly will post hers, which won, on her livejournal.


Steph L. - Mar 02, 2005 11:47:36 am PST #353 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

Ginger, your drabble reminds me of an ee cummings poem that I love:

In Just-
spring when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman

whistles far and wee

and eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring

when the world is puddle-wonderful

the queer
old balloonman whistles
far and wee
and bettyandisbel come dancing

from hop-scotch and jump-rope and

it's
spring
and
the

goat-footed

balloonMan whistles
far
and
wee


SailAweigh - Mar 02, 2005 12:46:18 pm PST #354 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I found it. It was just percolating around a little before it decided to quit playing hide and seek.

The Sunflower

The skirt was lemon yellow, cinched at the waist with broad black elastic and a row of hooks and eyes. Sleeveless yellow blouse with a low scoop neck that allowed the sun to reach nearly everywhere. I needed only shoes, until I saw them. Sitting there bold and bright in the spring sunlight at the outdoor gypsy market. Bright yellow fabric with a black wooden stacked heel. They begged to be worn, to tap a dance down the streets of Cadiz in merry revelry. To follow the sun like a flower in the field. So, I did that--in Spain.


Susan W. - Mar 02, 2005 2:08:30 pm PST #355 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I'm still trying to think of ideas for a drabble. I think I have fewer associations for yellow than for any other major color. Not sure why.

My new favorite research link from the British library: [link]

It's basically recordings, some nearly fifty years old, of people from different parts of England talking. So now if I want to hear a character better, all I have to do is find someone from the right place and listen in.


deborah grabien - Mar 02, 2005 3:20:40 pm PST #356 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, Sail, that's a lovely piece.


SailAweigh - Mar 02, 2005 3:42:07 pm PST #357 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Thanks, Deb. There's so much I miss about Spain. This was just one small way of expressing that.


Anne W. - Mar 02, 2005 5:11:12 pm PST #358 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Susan, thanks for posting that link! Now, if I could find a similar link illustrating different regional French accents, I would be a very, very happy girl indeed.