I may be love's bitch, but at least I'm man enough to admit it.

Spike ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Steph L. - Mar 02, 2005 11:47:36 am PST #353 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

Ginger, your drabble reminds me of an ee cummings poem that I love:

In Just-
spring when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman

whistles far and wee

and eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring

when the world is puddle-wonderful

the queer
old balloonman whistles
far and wee
and bettyandisbel come dancing

from hop-scotch and jump-rope and

it's
spring
and
the

goat-footed

balloonMan whistles
far
and
wee


SailAweigh - Mar 02, 2005 12:46:18 pm PST #354 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I found it. It was just percolating around a little before it decided to quit playing hide and seek.

The Sunflower

The skirt was lemon yellow, cinched at the waist with broad black elastic and a row of hooks and eyes. Sleeveless yellow blouse with a low scoop neck that allowed the sun to reach nearly everywhere. I needed only shoes, until I saw them. Sitting there bold and bright in the spring sunlight at the outdoor gypsy market. Bright yellow fabric with a black wooden stacked heel. They begged to be worn, to tap a dance down the streets of Cadiz in merry revelry. To follow the sun like a flower in the field. So, I did that--in Spain.


Susan W. - Mar 02, 2005 2:08:30 pm PST #355 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I'm still trying to think of ideas for a drabble. I think I have fewer associations for yellow than for any other major color. Not sure why.

My new favorite research link from the British library: [link]

It's basically recordings, some nearly fifty years old, of people from different parts of England talking. So now if I want to hear a character better, all I have to do is find someone from the right place and listen in.


deborah grabien - Mar 02, 2005 3:20:40 pm PST #356 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, Sail, that's a lovely piece.


SailAweigh - Mar 02, 2005 3:42:07 pm PST #357 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Thanks, Deb. There's so much I miss about Spain. This was just one small way of expressing that.


Anne W. - Mar 02, 2005 5:11:12 pm PST #358 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Susan, thanks for posting that link! Now, if I could find a similar link illustrating different regional French accents, I would be a very, very happy girl indeed.


erikaj - Mar 03, 2005 8:50:26 am PST #359 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

It’s just a sweater, the color of new corn or maybe the butter you might put on it. I was a very different girl when this was the sort of thing that got my attention on the rack.(I was a girl, too. Seventeen. Here in the middle of the desert we keep our sweaters for a long time.) I still love this color but have accepted that my life is never going to match it. When I was seventeen, I wasn’t ready. I just believed so much I wanted everyone’s day to be yellow and soft. This is a sweater of a girl embarrassed that she might want somebody’s tongue in her mouth. This is a sweater she could buy in the store with her dad, one of the few things he ever liked to see her in.(She pretends she never wonders what she’d look like in one of those other kinds of sweaters, now that They have finally arrived. She pretends so well she believes herself. She’s better off not being stared at, anyway. She spends so much time in her room being better off, three books is a slow week.) So, now, thirties, cleaning her closet. ”What have you got there?”

“Nothing. Just a sweater. I guess I’ll hang on to it, though.”


Beverly - Mar 03, 2005 8:56:09 am PST #360 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Oof. erika, that's got a kick like a mule. Powerful.


erikaj - Mar 03, 2005 9:01:55 am PST #361 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Huh. Thanks.(I've still got the damn sweater, too)


Pix - Mar 03, 2005 9:02:34 am PST #362 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Powerful drabble, Erika.