Mal: Well, look at this! Appears we got here just in the nick of time. What does that make us? Zoe: Big damn heroes, sir.

'Safe'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


§ ita § - Jul 06, 2005 2:22:16 pm PDT #3035 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

She licked his neck, long and deliberate strokes. Raising one hand, she pinned his head away from her, digging her palm into his damaged face.

She bit - not to suck, but to tear. A stroke downward, slicing across the jugular, and then across to either side laying the neck open, flaying flesh from bone and tendon, ripping veins and arteries alike.

Sluggish second-hand blood pooled in the waste of his neck. She kneed him once in the gut, driving through soft flesh and cracking bone, and dipped to drink again.

That would teach him not to poach her territory.


Aims - Jul 06, 2005 2:36:36 pm PDT #3036 of 10001
Shit's all sorts of different now.

Remind me never to take the last piece of lemon cake when your around, m'kay?


deborah grabien - Jul 06, 2005 4:42:16 pm PDT #3037 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Incompatible

They bring me the news after three rounds of tests, all of which leave me swollen, allergic, more determined than the test before. I either don't want to hear it or I don't understand; I'm too young to know better.

"Incompatible? A kidney is a kidney. I have two - they both work. He needs one. Take it."

Explanation, technico-medical jargon. The blood-draw sites are purple, oozing - no pre-test antihistamines.

Incompatible with his needs. If it's any consolation, I can give blood if they do find a kidney. I'm o-negative.

No, it's no consolation. No consolation at all.

Incompatible.


sj - Jul 06, 2005 5:13:35 pm PDT #3038 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Ouch. Good one, Deb.


deborah grabien - Jul 06, 2005 6:42:11 pm PDT #3039 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Man, there are some genuine corkers in here. Teppy picked a good one, you bet.


Susan W. - Jul 06, 2005 7:25:51 pm PDT #3040 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

GUESS WHO MADE THE SEMIFINALS OF A PRESTIGIOUS ROMANCE WRITING CONTEST!


deborah grabien - Jul 06, 2005 7:27:59 pm PDT #3041 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Susan! Kewl! Which one?


Susan W. - Jul 06, 2005 7:31:50 pm PDT #3042 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

The Denver RWA chapter's--it's called the Molly. They're unusual in that they have a semifinals. Most contests just send the top 3-5 first round scorers to the final round judge. In this one you have two first round judges, and the top 30% or so make the semifinals, where you're guaranteed published judges. But I've usually been closer to the middle of the pack, so just knowing I'm in the top ten or twelve in what's considered a tough contest feels good.


deborah grabien - Jul 06, 2005 7:53:10 pm PDT #3043 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Excellent!


sj - Jul 06, 2005 7:54:27 pm PDT #3044 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Go Susan!