Young Simon: So... how'd the Independents cut us off? Young River: They were using dinosaurs.

'Safe'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - Jun 28, 2005 7:21:13 am PDT #2976 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Wished elsewhere but it bears repeating: Happiest of Birthday wishes to Deb and Nic!


DebetEsse - Jun 28, 2005 8:09:10 am PDT #2977 of 10001
Woe to the fucking wicked.

Many Happy Returns of the day to you and Nic, Deb!


Ailleann - Jun 28, 2005 8:44:27 am PDT #2978 of 10001
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

And who knew how fast the phrase "cake and sex" could bring my muse running back? :)

(P.S. Happy Birthday Deb and Nic!)

Temptation

“Come on. You trust me, don’t you?”

“Of course I trust you. It’s just…”

She waffles. It did sound good… very good…mmm… but! It was so different! What if she didn’t like it? Or if he loved it, but she didn’t? Then he’d want it all the time…

He caught her eye. “Come on honey. Just this once. If you don’t like it, then never again.” Warm, inviting smile, with a hint of mischief. She is powerless.

“Yeah, you’re right.” The triple fudge cake mix hits the basket with an air of triumph. “But… could we still have vanilla icing?”


deborah grabien - Jun 28, 2005 8:45:58 am PDT #2979 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Heh. Of course, the trained cook over here is internally going "A MIX?!?!?"


Ailleann - Jun 28, 2005 8:48:28 am PDT #2980 of 10001
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

Deb, they're only at the beginning of their forays. Soon they'll be wantonly sifting dry ingredients! Shamelessly kneading dough and allowing it to rise! She will be seduced by high culinary arts, just you wait.


ChiKat - Jun 28, 2005 8:54:57 am PDT #2981 of 10001
That man was going to shank me. Over an omelette. Two eggs and a slice of government cheese. Is that what my life is worth?

"Why did you do that? Why did you hurt your friend like that?"

"You assume I had a reason. I didn't."

"So you thoughtlessly hurt her? You helped her husband cheat on her without any thought to it whatsoever?"

"Yeah, I guess I did."

“For absolutely no reason?”

“I suppose.”

“Not even children think like that. They have reasons, albeit often childish and selfish reasons, for doing things. But they’re children. That’s expected. You’re a full grown woman. How could you violate her trust like that? If this is how you operate, how can I ever trust you again?”


Lilty Cash - Jun 28, 2005 4:40:18 pm PDT #2982 of 10001
"You see? THAT's what they want. Love, and a bit with a dog."

So very late that by now it's old and overbaked, but it does bear repeating:

Very, very happy birthday to you, Deb!!!!!!


deborah grabien - Jun 28, 2005 6:27:20 pm PDT #2983 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

That cake is never overbaked. Thank you, ma'am.


Lilty Cash - Jun 28, 2005 6:38:35 pm PDT #2984 of 10001
"You see? THAT's what they want. Love, and a bit with a dog."

Very welcome.

Mmm. Cake.


JoeCrow - Jun 29, 2005 4:33:24 am PDT #2985 of 10001
"what's left when you take biology and sociology out of the picture?" "An autistic hermaphodite." -Allyson

Hey, anybody out there feel like taking a quick look at something for me? 4K words, first chapter of a werewolf novel for the White Wolf novel contest, due tomorrow. Pretty much any advice you can give would be groovy, whether on clarity, structure, jargon-watch, whatever. Hit me at joe AT joecrow DOT net.