Susan, insent with comments on that chapter from last week. Sorry I took so long on it.
Wesley: Illyria can be...difficult. Testing her might be hard without getting someone seriously hurt. Angel: We'll make Spike do it. Wesley: Good.
'Underneath'
The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Hil R. - May 26, 2005 6:20:11 am PDT #2342 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
deborah grabien - May 26, 2005 7:24:51 am PDT #2343 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I'm supposed to be writing the jacket copy for Matty Groves.
My creative so-called brain is definitively elsewhere....
Allyson - May 26, 2005 10:43:29 am PDT #2344 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Got another bite from an agent requesting my manuscript.
Keep fingers crossed....
deborah grabien - May 26, 2005 10:45:15 am PDT #2345 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Go, Allyson!
ita! I just wrote The Section, where the reader gets their first solid introduction to Domitra Calley, the bodyguard. You're very recognisable, physically, in this.
She gets to call my protagonist - based on the original love of my life - a dick.
I am soooooooooo happy.
Let me know if you want it on its own, or with the rest.
edit: oh, man, my daughter is of the funny. I'd said, A question: Scene is a medical clinic, funded and licensed to treat heroin addicts. They have drugs, are licensed to store them for the treatment of said addicts. What in hell is the proper term for the room where those drugs would be locked, stored, kept, and inventoried?
My daughter's response?
Bobby Brown and Whitney Houston's house.
What?
Amy - May 26, 2005 10:57:49 am PDT #2346 of 10001
Because books.
Got another bite from an agent requesting my manuscript.
Awesome. Crossing them now.
Bobby Brown and Whitney Houston's house.
Snerk.
§ ita § - May 26, 2005 11:14:05 am PDT #2347 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Congrats, Allyson!
Deb -- all together would be best, for context.
deborah grabien - May 26, 2005 11:17:21 am PDT #2348 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
ita, sending the entire thing, edited and updated to this point. It's a bit over 100 pages, just about 21K words. Dump any older version - the one I'm sending replaces them.
deborah grabien - May 26, 2005 2:19:02 pm PDT #2349 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Music in Shadowland
"Talk to him."
I say nothing. He's been unconcious for a few hours; a mild heart episode, they said, but it happened during dialysis and somehow, some way, he's just decided to shut it all down for a bit. He's not dying - I'd know if he was. But he's not here, either.
"You should talk to him, Deborah. You never know what a person in this state will react to."
I say nothing. I lace my fingers through the long pianist's fingers, and bring my lips to his ear.
"Talk to him."
I begin to hum, his favourite riff.
SailAweigh - May 26, 2005 2:59:31 pm PDT #2350 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Deb, that is absolutely beautiful.
deborah grabien - May 26, 2005 3:12:11 pm PDT #2351 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
It's also absolutely true. Happened the same day I tried to kill a would-be rapist who picked me up hitching to get to the hospital.
Life - weirdly enough - was cleaner and simpler back then.