Don't you just love this party? Everything's so fancy, and there's some kind of hot cheese over there.

Kaylee ,'Shindig'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


SailAweigh - May 21, 2005 8:13:58 pm PDT #2241 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

( continues...) charity, prudence, justice, fortitude and temperance.


deborah grabien - May 21, 2005 9:42:40 pm PDT #2242 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Sail, this:

Grocery shopping is an exercise in futility, anymore.

Reads oddly. anymore isn't the word there, I don't think. Nowadays, maybe?

OTOH, this:

Two ideas opposed to each other, agape and eros

made me extremely happy.


SailAweigh - May 21, 2005 9:52:24 pm PDT #2243 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Yes, I think your choice scans better. Ima go change it.


Astarte - May 22, 2005 5:38:25 am PDT #2244 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Very thought provoking, Sail.

I particularly love "two bodies worshipping together."


Jesse - May 22, 2005 5:41:26 am PDT #2245 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Those are great. The "anymore" is a construction my East Texas (now San Diego) grandmother uses, btw.


deborah grabien - May 22, 2005 6:41:12 am PDT #2246 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I think it pinged me because "anymore" is always associated with a negative, IME. I wouldn't say "I used to cry. Now I laugh, anymore." I'd only associate that with the not-doing, as something that once was, but now isn't: "I used to cry. Now I don't cry, anymore.Or, alternately, "I used to cry. Now I laugh instead."


SailAweigh - May 22, 2005 6:44:39 am PDT #2247 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

The "anymore" is a construction my East Texas (now San Diego) grandmother uses, btw.

It's what I grew up with, but there are a few regionalism that tend to be very regional. Deb's suggestion will probably be more recognizable to more people. Sometimes, I think I start to channel my Grandmother (who was from North Dakota and grew up calling electricity "the electric"), which can be interesting, but not always completely understandable to the masses.

If you're interested in very arcane lifestyles that don't exist anymore, look up a book called "The Last of the Sod Houses." It's about my grandmother's and some other families that grew up in North Dakota at the turn of the century. It was self-published, so it's not easy to find. I don't even know if I have my copy anymore, with all the moves I've done.


Jesse - May 22, 2005 6:49:51 am PDT #2248 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

I wouldn't say "I used to cry. Now I laugh, anymore."

That's pretty much how my grandmother would say it, though. Not that the edit to Sail's piece didn't make it more clear to more people, but that the original was not wrong, just regional.


deborah grabien - May 22, 2005 7:27:17 am PDT #2249 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Jesse, yup, I get the regional - more than twenty years of being back in the States hasn't leeched all the London slang out of me, and I get the occasional blank "huh?" look from non-travelling American friends who have no clue what "parky" or "his Hampton" might mean.

It really is just a question of what the majority of readers are likely to recognise.


SailAweigh - May 22, 2005 7:29:40 am PDT #2250 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Okay, deb, those are two I've never come across and I thought I had a good familitarity with most Britishisms. Now, you're going to have to explain to all of us what "parky" and "his Hampton" mean.