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Zoe ,'The Train Job'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - Apr 27, 2005 8:12:31 pm PDT #1468 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I thought copyeditors were a dying breed, are they really still commonly used?

They're commonly used at St. Martin's. Actually, Matty Groves makes book number seven to be published by a mainstream house, and I have never not seen a copyedited version before it went to production. I liked my St. Martin's copy edit for Plainsong; four post-it notes. That will never happen to me again, I'm pretty sure.


Beverly - Apr 27, 2005 9:57:09 pm PDT #1469 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

I mean, I may talk the hind leg off a spitting llama in meatspace,

(I happen to know this is factually true)

but in writing, I'm far more likely to say "the night sky was abalone and ink" than I am to say "the night sky, shivering under a load of stars like tiny golden irridiscent pearls, fell upon her bowed shoulders like mantle of purest indigo velvet", or whatever.

And the first is freighted with meaning, the second is just a messy load of words obscuring story, character, and narrative.


Topic!Cindy - Apr 28, 2005 3:03:31 am PDT #1470 of 10001
What is even happening?

Heh. Cindy, no, that wasn't at you - I had actually been talking about the whole "but amateurs do it for love" thing in email, on an entirely different subject, earlier, so it was fresh in my memory curcuits. Robin, yep, I'm with you, but have you noticed how the whole idea of "no one's paying you for it yet so you must suck!" has crept into common intonation when the word is used in speech?
Oh, you made it clear it wasn't to me, when you said you were going off on a tangent. I actually agree with your point, anyhow.

That copy editor story made me shudder.

Ginger, your drabble is powerful.

"the night sky, shivering under a load of stars like tiny golden irridiscent pearls, fell upon her bowed shoulders like mantle of purest indigo velvet"

Hee. Someday, we should start a group project in which we write a story using only the worst stuff we can come up with. Isn't there a contest for "It was a dark and stormy night," sort of writing?


Cashmere - Apr 28, 2005 3:12:46 am PDT #1471 of 10001
Now tagless for your comfort.

Isn't there a contest for "It was a dark and stormy night," sort of writing?

Yes.


Topic!Cindy - Apr 28, 2005 4:07:47 am PDT #1472 of 10001
What is even happening?

Thanks, Cashmere. I didn't realize it was only for an opening sentence. Well, we could certainly all enter. Deb should submit that, "[...]the night sky, shivering under a load of stars like tiny golden irridiscent pearls, fell upon her bowed shoulders like mantle of purest indigo velvet," sentence, provided it wouldn't damage her professional reputation to do so.


Nutty - Apr 28, 2005 4:43:42 am PDT #1473 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

I think the majority of published works do see a copyeditor at one point or another, but it's more of a rushed process now than it used to be, and never pays well. A good copyeditor describes a stylesheet before beginning (and checks it with the author, to establish the norms of, e.g., forms of speech), and whenever anything beyond a basic, obvious change is made, querys the author.

In the age of email, there's no excuse any longer for not checking before making a substantial change. Then again, any time the CE queries, there's the chance that the author will say, "No, I meant for 'decimate' to mean 'eliminate 90%,'" and the CE will just sigh.


Steph L. - Apr 28, 2005 4:59:58 am PDT #1474 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

Someday, we should start a group project in which we write a story using only the worst stuff we can come up with. Isn't there a contest for "It was a dark and stormy night," sort of writing?

That was almost this week's drabble topic -- write the worst, most florid, most deadly dull, most [however you define "bad writing"] drabble you possibly can.


Betsy HP - Apr 28, 2005 5:18:51 am PDT #1475 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Then again, any time the CE queries, there's the chance that the author will say, "No, I meant for 'decimate' to mean 'eliminate 90%,'" and the CE will just sigh.

Because that battle is well and truly lost. (I prefer the precise meaning myself, but nobody in the real world knows enough Roman history to care.)

Hey, I still think 'data' is plural.


Steph L. - Apr 28, 2005 5:38:31 am PDT #1476 of 10001
the hardest to learn / was the least complicated

"Data" IS plural; after editing scientific articles for 10 years, where you can bet every single instance of "data" is made plural, it drives me bonkers to read/hear "data" as singular in mainstream (non-scientific) media.


Connie Neil - Apr 28, 2005 5:44:07 am PDT #1477 of 10001
brillig

nobody in the real world knows enough Roman history to care

I care!