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Connie Neil - Feb 03, 2005 6:55:31 am PST #8968 of 10002
brillig

what if he's the *one* conservative prof on campus

Make the next poem a more conservative one and make him think the first one was you pandering to "that darned liberal slant" that's perceived to taint modern higher education. Then they'll realize you're adaptable.


Connie Neil - Feb 03, 2005 6:57:57 am PST #8969 of 10002
brillig

I'm playing my classical playlist. Callas is singing. Mmm, La Divina ...


-t - Feb 03, 2005 7:03:03 am PST #8970 of 10002
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Turn in the one you've got, then. It'll be like an experiment.


Scrappy - Feb 03, 2005 7:06:07 am PST #8971 of 10002
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

Don't second guess, vw. Write what moves you and you think is good and let them respond to it. After all, the class is for YOU , the education is for YOUR use, and the truer you are to your impulses the more you will learn about them. You are in school to challenge and improve yourself, not to please professors you don't even know.


Connie Neil - Feb 03, 2005 7:08:04 am PST #8972 of 10002
brillig

When we censor our honest feelings for fear of rocking boats we're not even sure are there, the terrorists have won.


vw bug - Feb 03, 2005 7:08:15 am PST #8973 of 10002
Mostly lurking...

Thank you for all the support everyone. I think I am going to turn it in. I may turn in a second too (since I'm already working on it), but I really do like it.


Connie Neil - Feb 03, 2005 7:11:22 am PST #8974 of 10002
brillig

Hmph, now I'm rethinking myself. The Miss Manners voice in my head pointed out that a lot of honest feelings should just stay at home where the rest of the world won't have to get them on their shoes. Which is true.

Honest feelings in civil discourse. It's a good thing.


Lee - Feb 03, 2005 7:14:30 am PST #8975 of 10002
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

I got stuck next to a Doritos delivery truck on the drive in this morning. It's somewhat disconcerting to have to see tortilla chips that are bigger than your head when you haven't had coffee yet.


vw bug - Feb 03, 2005 7:29:54 am PST #8976 of 10002
Mostly lurking...

I just finished the second poem. It's actually not too bad. I also just e-mailed the teaching assistant of our class and asked his advice. I'll see what he says...


-t - Feb 03, 2005 7:37:13 am PST #8977 of 10002
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

I also just e-mailed the teaching assistant of our class and asked his advice.

Oh sure, go to someone who knows the professor and his expectations.