Jesse, what are you finding problematic? I'm looking at this composition with a raised eyebrow:
friends with the ferocious animals and tribespeople of Namibia
So simple to fix...so simple. Even if they deserve the benefit of the doubt, I have to reread the sentence to give it to them, which is clumsy writing.
Crap, Scrappy. I am sorry to hear that news.
Oh shit, Scrappy! I'm so sorry!
Jesse, what are you finding problematic? I'm looking at this composition with a raised eyebrow:
That, plus she never sees children while being friends with the ferocious tribespeople? Also, I feel like there's something not good about acclimating wild animals to people, because they will probably get killed by the next person who gets that close. Also I hate "born in Africa," because presumably she was born somewhere specific. I would maybe mind less if it described her parents as European??
I've been there 11 years. Still shellshocked, I gotta say. The owner wants to sell the company at some point, so I've been beginning to look around anyway. It could be worse.
Scrappy, I'm so sorry. Tons of job~ma to you.
You've been there 11 years? Holy crap -- I remember when you started!