Um, well, we listened to aggressively cheerful music sung by people chosen for their ability to dance. Then we ate cookie dough, and talked about boys.

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Strix - Sep 07, 2011 7:42:23 pm PDT #423 of 1416
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

If you want to collapse the line for a res, I'd suggest "Senior Executive with specialized experience in designing and implementing strategies for legal, corporate and higher education fields."

Chopping it further for a card: "Senior Executive - Legal, Corporate and Higher Education Strategist"


Vortex - Sep 07, 2011 7:43:37 pm PDT #424 of 1416
"Cry havoc and let slip the boobs of war!" -- Miracleman

"Senior Executive with specialized experience in designing and implementing strategies for legal, corporate and higher education fields."

This ROCKS. I'm using this!!!


Strix - Sep 07, 2011 7:45:25 pm PDT #425 of 1416
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

* blows smoke from wordslingin' gun*


Vortex - Sep 07, 2011 7:51:06 pm PDT #426 of 1416
"Cry havoc and let slip the boobs of war!" -- Miracleman

Um, what do you charge for resume review again? I mean, if that was a free sample, I should have you give it a look!


JenP - Sep 07, 2011 7:52:04 pm PDT #427 of 1416

* blows smoke from wordslingin' gun*

Dude, best and fastest gun in the... world of Wordslingin'.

Awesome.


Vortex - Sep 07, 2011 8:18:35 pm PDT #428 of 1416
"Cry havoc and let slip the boobs of war!" -- Miracleman

And now, thoughts on business card design.

Option 1

Option 2

and the back of option 2.

I'm inclined toward Option 2, but am concerned that it's "girly" because of the swoosh.


Strix - Sep 07, 2011 8:44:50 pm PDT #429 of 1416
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

I like Option 2; the swirl is feminine, but not girly, and it's simple. The dark blue is sober and classic.

Resumes, I charge $50/ hour for simple review and tweaking; if it's a pretty complete rewrite and reformatting (you'd be going with a CV or res?) it's about $250.


meara - Sep 07, 2011 9:10:18 pm PDT #430 of 1416

I like #2 better (though I can totally see #1 as your style)

But for a business card, I like Erin's shorter version ('Senior Executive - Legal, Corporate and Higher Education Strategist') much better.


beekaytee - Sep 07, 2011 10:11:02 pm PDT #431 of 1416
Compassionately intolerant

I agree about option 2. It's lovely, distinctive and easier to read than the first one.


Ginger - Sep 08, 2011 4:42:52 am PDT #432 of 1416
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Light on dark is hard to read on printed materials, particularly with the font that small.

I think you need something that's shorter and more of a selling proposition on the front and a mini-resume on the back. Try Googling "networking business cards."

Perhaps I will have more concrete ideas after more coffee.