If you want to collapse the line for a res, I'd suggest "Senior Executive with specialized experience in designing and implementing strategies for legal, corporate and higher education fields."
Chopping it further for a card: "Senior Executive - Legal, Corporate and Higher Education Strategist"
"Senior Executive with specialized experience in designing and implementing strategies for legal, corporate and higher education fields."
This ROCKS. I'm using this!!!
* blows smoke from wordslingin' gun*
Um, what do you charge for resume review again? I mean, if that was a free sample, I should have you give it a look!
* blows smoke from wordslingin' gun*
Dude, best and fastest gun in the... world of Wordslingin'.
Awesome.
And now, thoughts on business card design.
Option 1
Option 2
and the back of option 2.
I'm inclined toward Option 2, but am concerned that it's "girly" because of the swoosh.
I like Option 2; the swirl is feminine, but not girly, and it's simple. The dark blue is sober and classic.
Resumes, I charge $50/ hour for simple review and tweaking; if it's a pretty complete rewrite and reformatting (you'd be going with a CV or res?) it's about $250.
I like #2 better (though I can totally see #1 as your style)
But for a business card, I like Erin's shorter version ('Senior Executive - Legal, Corporate and Higher Education Strategist') much better.
I agree about option 2. It's lovely, distinctive and easier to read than the first one.
Light on dark is hard to read on printed materials, particularly with the font that small.
I think you need something that's shorter and more of a selling proposition on the front and a mini-resume on the back. Try Googling "networking business cards."
Perhaps I will have more concrete ideas after more coffee.