This is my boat. They're part of my crew. No one's getting left. Best you get used to that.

Mal ,'Ariel'


Natter 66: Get Your Kicks.  

Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, pandas, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.


Connie Neil - Sep 22, 2010 8:47:28 am PDT #25439 of 30001
brillig

Bought another writing book, this one specifically on sentence structure. Her chapter on punctuation was essentially "Semi-colons have a use in sentences, especially with lists, but I think they're ugly and think that a sentence should be split into two instead of being joined with a semi-colon. To me, using a semi-colon is just showing off that you know how to use that particular punctuation mark and that you don't care about the esthetics of a sentence and being as clear as possible to the reader." She's a big fan of short sentences.

I thought of my Buffistas and how you would make her cry.


Kate P. - Sep 22, 2010 8:49:46 am PDT #25440 of 30001
That's the pain / That cuts a straight line down through the heart / We call it love

There is a NYT op-ed that is making me seethe today. I can't imagine what Lily Ledbetter must be feeling.

Which one, Sparky? I could do with a good seething.


tommyrot - Sep 22, 2010 8:50:04 am PDT #25441 of 30001
Sir, it's not an offence to let your cat eat your bacon. Okay? And we don't arrest cats, I'm very sorry.

"Semi-colons have a use in sentences, especially with lists, but I think they're ugly and think that a sentence should be split into two instead of being joined with a semi-colon. To me, using a semi-colon is just showing off that you know how to use that particular punctuation mark and that you don't care about the esthetics of a sentence and being as clear as possible to the reader."

Now I want to send her an email with as many semi-colons as possible.


§ ita § - Sep 22, 2010 8:50:33 am PDT #25442 of 30001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I'm not sure what that means in this context, but it sounds good.

The doctors and nurses swear my pain management doctors have created a pain contract for me in the ER, and that they must follow that to the letter. No such thing ever happened, because my pain management doctors refuse to prescribe me any sort of medication (don't ask, I can't answer). But when a doctor/nurse is feeling balky, they cite some magic document. My migraine specialist has finally found this document, and I hope he can exercise some degree of control over it. I can't bargain on cool nurses like last week.

If I hadn't had such a decent ER experience Sunday morning, there's no way I could work after two nights of such poor sleep. My head is killing. I just really need to drag myself through every day this week.


Lee - Sep 22, 2010 8:50:43 am PDT #25443 of 30001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

I really am the whiniest sick person ever.

OOOH, a challenge!


Sparky1 - Sep 22, 2010 8:50:49 am PDT #25444 of 30001
Librarian Warlord

Which one, Sparky?

This one: [link]


flea - Sep 22, 2010 8:52:51 am PDT #25445 of 30001
information libertarian

I join your seethe, Sparky. Equal pay for equal work - how hard is that to understand?


§ ita § - Sep 22, 2010 8:52:51 am PDT #25446 of 30001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Get the fuck out of town. What can I wish for now?

I mean, apart from a nap?


aurelia - Sep 22, 2010 8:53:19 am PDT #25447 of 30001
All sorrows can be borne if you put them into a story. Tell me a story.

A few miles from my apartment, a business had half of its roof blown off.

I was surprised to see all that on the news last night. It rained here, but I didn't notice any crazy wind.

Potassium Chlorate + A Red Gummy Bear

Who gets to clean up that tube?


Gudanov - Sep 22, 2010 8:53:33 am PDT #25448 of 30001
Coding and Sleeping

What if I have two independent clauses that have a lot in common and want to be joined together? Why can't they express related idea love?