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Natter 65: Speed Limit Enforced by Aircraft  

Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, pandas, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.


Gudanov - Apr 06, 2010 8:47:36 am PDT #21307 of 30001
Coding and Sleeping

Rejection is the writer's lot.

I have this argument with myself over the book I'm working on. Should I try to follow advice on how to make a book more publishable or not. In some ways it feels like a fool's errand since the odds of getting published are pretty damn low, on the other hand, the odds are already low so why make them even lower.

Fortunately, the majority of the advice is stuff that simply makes for better writing. While I haven't changed the story in a substantial way, I have modified things to make it more appealing for agents (according to what I've read, often by agents) and found I really liked how it ended up and wouldn't want to change it back. Turns out agents know what they are talking about.

Wordcount is turning out to be a bitch though, while the exercise of trying to pare out all the unnecessary words is a very good one, I worry I'm not putting in enough to give flavor to the world and some of the characters. It's tough with Fantasy books because so many good ones shatter the maximum recommended wordcount or don't really complete a story.

Oops, rambled. I'm not even sure what my point was anymore.


Jesse - Apr 06, 2010 8:48:08 am PDT #21308 of 30001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Sorry about that, Allyson. And what David said is right.

Also, you people made me remember the Butterscotch Stallion, which is not what my day needed.


Gudanov - Apr 06, 2010 8:49:08 am PDT #21309 of 30001
Coding and Sleeping

Yes, David is wise, definitely not a waste.


Stephanie - Apr 06, 2010 8:49:08 am PDT #21310 of 30001
Trust my rage

Butterscotch Stallion? Is that what it sounds like?


Allyson - Apr 06, 2010 8:49:37 am PDT #21311 of 30001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Ugh. I really hate hate hate doing it but I might have to ask Tim for a little help, too.

I feel really hackish right now. I hope it subsides quickly.


Jesse - Apr 06, 2010 8:49:59 am PDT #21312 of 30001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

It's Owen Wilson, apparently.


Gudanov - Apr 06, 2010 8:50:27 am PDT #21313 of 30001
Coding and Sleeping

Butterscotch Stallion? Is that what it sounds like?

I figure it's some cowgirl thing.


msbelle - Apr 06, 2010 8:53:17 am PDT #21314 of 30001
I remember the crazy days. 500 posts an hour. Nubmer! Natgbsb

I think I am getting this light for over the kitchen sink: [link]

I think I've said before how most of the fixtures are polished brass. I want to eventually move toward chrome in most places.


DavidS - Apr 06, 2010 8:53:37 am PDT #21315 of 30001
"Look, son, if it's good enough for Shirley Bassey, it's good enough for you."

I'm not even sure what my point was anymore.

Writing is hard?

I do try to remember that when I see a clumsy bit of exposition. Writing is an art, but it's also a craft and mastering both elements is difficult.


§ ita § - Apr 06, 2010 8:54:09 am PDT #21316 of 30001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Also, you people made me remember the Butterscotch Stallion

Yeah, I'm gonna have to stick with CafeAuLait69 as my new and improved username, I think. Owen has ruined butterscotch for me.