Don't worry, I'm not gonna start any sword fights. I'm over that phase.

Mal ,'War Stories'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Allyson - Aug 25, 2008 11:50:26 am PDT #753 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I just went and reread the chapter. Seriously, I'd rather have a block than "I AM SHIT" on a continuous loop in my head.


Toddson - Aug 25, 2008 12:16:07 pm PDT #754 of 6681
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

Allyson, it may be time to step away from it. You are smart and funny and you can write - you may just need some time away from it to refresh your perspective.


Allyson - Aug 25, 2008 12:23:14 pm PDT #755 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Gotta push through, it's due October 1st.


Amy - Aug 25, 2008 12:30:31 pm PDT #756 of 6681
Because books.

Due to who, Allyson?


Allyson - Aug 25, 2008 12:32:28 pm PDT #757 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Agent Kate!


Amy - Aug 25, 2008 12:34:14 pm PDT #758 of 6681
Because books.

Ah. If you need more time to make it right (or take a step back), though, she'll understand.

My advice is to stop rereading it and push through, just to get it out, but also to take more time with it if you need to.


Allyson - Aug 26, 2008 9:31:41 am PDT #759 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I need some help with UK geography in terms of where container ships pull into port, how far from Liverpool, and how far Liverpool is from Buckingham Palace. Anyone feeling helpful?


Wolfram - Aug 26, 2008 3:06:48 pm PDT #760 of 6681
Visilurking

Sorry, I've been MIA. Typo and Sail, loved your drabbles.

Contact

Screaming had died down, and they hadn’t found him. Yet. He harbored no illusions that they wouldn’t. Fuck this government and its shoot-first-and-then-shoot-second mentality. Not that he had any say. Or rights.

A soft droning in the distance grew louder.

They’d come in peace. Giant bees, so what. Yeah. Didn’t count on their fuckin’ warships. Or their wacky abilities.

The din increased. He could see the fluttering shadows. A razor sharp tendril phased through the cell bars.

Nothing to use as a weapon, not even on himself. Fuck.

It reached out and through him. Tickled a little. At first.


SailAweigh - Aug 26, 2008 5:27:15 pm PDT #761 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Ack. Wolfram, that gave me the serious heebie-jeebies. Yehh.


Wolfram - Aug 27, 2008 7:09:47 am PDT #762 of 6681
Visilurking

Thanks. (Influenced by the books The Stand and Ender's Game, and by recent viewings of the films I Am Legend, and Shaun of the Dead.)