How about instead of "before", "until her mother's return..."
And I feel like it wants a bit more transition between "...derails her life." and "Before long..."
You know, my big sister could really beat the crap out of her. I mean, really really.
Dawn ,'Storyteller'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
EpicTangent - Aug 28, 2015 12:39:56 pm PDT #6361 of 6687
Why isn't everyone pelting me with JOY, dammit? - Zenkitty
Gudanov - Aug 31, 2015 7:29:26 am PDT #6362 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping
Thanks for the input!
Tom Scola - Sep 08, 2015 8:51:52 am PDT #6363 of 6687
Mr. Scola’s wardrobe by Botany 500
The general consensus is that it’s the best time since the very early days of the web to make money by writing online, and a marked improvement from even two years ago.
Many newer outlets offer upwards of fifty cents per word or more—sites like The Verge might pay a dollar per word—as do established publications including New York‘s blog network and The Guardian.
Amy - Sep 08, 2015 10:51:08 am PDT #6364 of 6687
Because books.
Then there's this: [link]
Laura - Sep 10, 2015 5:06:22 am PDT #6365 of 6687
Our wings are not tired.
This review! [link] Pretty much says it.
Ginger - Sep 10, 2015 5:38:31 am PDT #6366 of 6687
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
NPR! NPR! Yay!
-t - Sep 22, 2015 2:06:04 pm PDT #6367 of 6687
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
Polter-Cow! The October issue of Asimov's has a familiar name under Coming Soon!
I get my vicarious thrills where I can.
Polter-Cow - Sep 22, 2015 7:50:28 pm PDT #6368 of 6687
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Polter-Cow! The October issue of Asimov's has a familiar name under Coming Soon!
AAAAHHHH WHAT SHIT AAAHHHH.
Oh God what does it say does it say anything.
-t - Sep 22, 2015 8:25:51 pm PDT #6369 of 6687
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
Let's see if this works. [link]
Polter-Cow - Sep 23, 2015 4:25:58 am PDT #6370 of 6687
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.