That's not what making out sounds like -- unless I'm doing it wrong?

Willow ,'Same Time, Same Place'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Sep 04, 2013 5:30:23 am PDT #5819 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

I'm buzzing through Dragonfire, buzzing for me at least, I've got about 19,000 words now. My goal is no more than 75k and then hopefully edit down a bit from there. I have an ace up my sleeve in a decent ending place earlier in the tale.

I'm waiting for word on my latest revision for Cog. I know it won't be the last round though as Cog is too long as is. It's lost 5k, but needs to lose another 8k. The last revision added length, but it addressed the issues that intern, reader, and agent came up with. Unfortunately, most of those issues required more instead of less. I had to cut a bit of plot to at least have it be 5k less than the original manuscript.

I swear, wordcount is my eternal foe. My agent must have really liked the ms to take on an overlong novel.


Connie Neil - Sep 04, 2013 6:03:32 am PDT #5820 of 6687
brillig

My agent must have really liked the ms to take on an overlong novel.

So maybe it's not overlong?


Amy - Sep 04, 2013 4:46:37 pm PDT #5821 of 6687
Because books.

This lost me a little after the .gif on top but it's a cool discussion of story structure.


Gudanov - Sep 05, 2013 6:07:23 am PDT #5822 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

A couple of blog posts today.

One on my agent's blog about Scrivener. [link]

And one on my blog about mocking books. [link]

My agent is shut down for submissions and is doing a series of guest posts to concentrate on catching up. I'm all for this :).


erikaj - Sep 05, 2013 8:26:21 am PDT #5823 of 6687
Always Anti-fascist!

How many times do you/would you revise the same story before deciding that somehow it doesn't work?


Gudanov - Sep 05, 2013 9:12:01 am PDT #5824 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

I don't think I've ever given up on a story. I might rewrite it until it doesn't resemble the original.


Gudanov - Sep 05, 2013 9:13:48 am PDT #5825 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

Is it crazy to pick out pictures that kinda/sorta look like how you imagine the characters in your novel? Scrivener lets me paste in pictures so I did. It does help me a little when I come up with descriptions even if they don't really match exactly.


Toddson - Sep 05, 2013 9:29:49 am PDT #5826 of 6687
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

Gud, I'd say use whatever works for you.

But what do I know? my writing is strictly factual magazine artcles for a trade pub.


Amy - Sep 05, 2013 9:35:20 am PDT #5827 of 6687
Because books.

Lots of authors clip pictures to use as character inspiration. LOTS.

And erika, I think you have to revise a story until *you're* happy with it. If it doesn't sell after that, put it away for a while and work on the next thing.


Toddson - Sep 05, 2013 9:59:16 am PDT #5828 of 6687
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

I was reading something, somewhere (yes, I'm precise, aren't I?) where an author was quoted saying she was a re-writer - that she'd rewrite and revise until she had something she felt hit the mark.

Of course, this was someone (Judith Viorst perhaps - I read a long article on her) who had books published. I'm sure there are writers who are in a constant state of revision with nothing final.