Good luck. Try not to kill people. Hands! Hands!

Willow ,'Storyteller'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - Jul 23, 2013 1:43:57 pm PDT #5750 of 6687
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Also, in terms of saving the dog: lots of really evil people are sentimental about animals. Kind of ironic if, after killing many people, your villain chooses to spare the dog.

Could even be a good bit of dialog.

"After all the people you tortured and murdered, you spare a dog?"

"I *like* dogs."


Gudanov - Jul 24, 2013 5:04:45 am PDT #5751 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

Well, the villain isn't really evil, he has good intentions, but he's determined to be blind to the consequences of his actions. Sort of like someone who wants to produce energy and create jobs, but refuses to believe in climate change because it's, well, inconvenient.

There has to be a sacrifice at the end of the story, but it's just a matter of who and what. I'm hoping to avoid dog and death.


Typo Boy - Jul 24, 2013 8:44:45 am PDT #5752 of 6687
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Sacrifice the character the readers love most? Why yes, Joss and Tim have influenced me.


Toddson - Jul 24, 2013 8:45:37 am PDT #5753 of 6687
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

Only if you do it in the most emotionally wrenching way possible.


Connie Neil - Jul 24, 2013 8:49:54 am PDT #5754 of 6687
brillig

Whenever there's a cute critter, I'm always certain it's going to die. I've been known to check the last chapter to see if the critter's still there. Killing off the hero's beloved pet seems cheap, anymore.

But I loved the villain going "I *like* dogs." Humanity, not so much.

Villains working with a sense of righteous purpose are the most dangerous. Pure evil can be negotiated with.


hippocampus - Jul 24, 2013 9:02:02 am PDT #5755 of 6687
not your mom's socks.

Critters in books, yes, often -- I am still mad at The Knife of Never Letting Go for that. Completely unnecessary.

In movies? You want to live? Safest place to stand is next to the dog.


Amy - Jul 24, 2013 9:09:13 am PDT #5756 of 6687
Because books.

You've never watched Games of Thrones, huh?


hippocampus - Jul 24, 2013 9:27:19 am PDT #5757 of 6687
not your mom's socks.

HMPH


Amy - Jul 24, 2013 9:28:39 am PDT #5758 of 6687
Because books.

Hee.


Gudanov - Jul 25, 2013 4:55:57 am PDT #5759 of 6687
Coding and Sleeping

I think I've figured out my sacrifice along with most of the plot. I just hope the plot isn't too long to squeeze into a MG wordcount.