Would somebody please do a beta-read on the crime story I've just rewritten?
Y'all see the man hanging out of the spaceship with the really big gun? Now I'm not saying you weren't easy to find. It was kinda out of our way, and he didn't want to come in the first place. Man's lookin' to kill some folk. So really it's his will y'all should worry about thwarting.
Mal ,'Safe'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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erikaj - Jul 10, 2013 2:54:34 pm PDT #5719 of 6728
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
Amy - Jul 11, 2013 7:00:20 am PDT #5720 of 6728
Because books.
erika, I could possibly next week. This week I'm trying to catch up work-work as well as freelance, as well as finish unpacking this apartment.
erikaj - Jul 11, 2013 7:38:05 am PDT #5721 of 6728
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
Ok, that'd be good. I'll send it Monday or Tuesday, then.(I am trying to send it out, but it's not time-sensitive or anything.)
erikaj - Jul 11, 2013 7:46:36 am PDT #5722 of 6728
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
Cereal: thank you!
Ginger - Jul 11, 2013 7:47:40 am PDT #5723 of 6728
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
Erika, I could look at it between now and Monday.
erikaj - Jul 11, 2013 7:54:45 am PDT #5724 of 6728
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
Ok, Ginger. Insent.
Amy - Jul 12, 2013 5:46:10 am PDT #5725 of 6728
Because books.
I can still look next week if you want, erika.
erikaj - Jul 12, 2013 7:38:48 am PDT #5726 of 6728
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
That'd be cool, Amy, thank you. I think I posted that and bolted off to the dentist, which, don't ask, but it turned into a Thing when I wasn't expecting it.
Gudanov - Jul 12, 2013 9:33:41 am PDT #5727 of 6728
Coding and Sleeping
I'd love to say yes, but I'm over-committed at the time. It would take me a long time to get to it.
erikaj - Jul 12, 2013 10:02:31 am PDT #5728 of 6728
"already on the kiss-cam with Karl Marx"-
Thank you...that is a real compliment. Since you're so busy, though, I'll let you know first if it's going to come out, or maybe you can help with version 3.5?