My criteria as a personal reader used to be that if you can't hook me in the first 30 pages, you're outta there. (Goodbye, Dune.) And these days it's getting even more stringent. With fanfic, it's like the first three paragraphs just based on SPAG or formatting. After that (since some fanfic can be really short), I give it a couple more pages to see if they have any real world knowledge about what they're writing or at least made a decent attempt at research. I hate poor research. I'm harsh.
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Big revision was sent off to my agent this week. Hoping it goes well and the next revisions aren't quite so big.
Ah, I liked Dune. Of course I was listening to the audiobook which had a full cast and was excellent. My favorite audiobook remains The Golden Compass though, also with a full cast with the author doing the narration himself.
Just sent out my first partial. Oh if there is book~ma to spare, I'd love some.
Good luck, lots of ~ma. It didn't take you long to get that first request :).
What Gud said! Yay!
wrod.
So I'm working on a story. The character is doing stupid things. She has to do the stupid things to further the plot, and they're in character, but god, I hate having to associate with this person who's being so blatantly stupid. It makes it difficult to write the scenes. I can't even look forward to her comeuppance, because it's going to be painful and messy and bad.
Sox, lots of ~ma to you!
thanks you guys!
Connie - (possibly dumb questions you've already considered) is the character aware they are stupid things? what's motivating her?