Actually, the boring advice is somewhat useful. If I'm looking at a scene and I hate it, eventually it dawns on me that maybe the problem is with the scene and not me. Or if I'm racking my brain trying to think of a way to get someone into a car, I'll suddenly go "Duh!" and write "He got in the car."

I know, revelatory, isn't it?

From my local blog: Brooklyn Heights Novelist Jennifer Miller Hawks Her Book Via Novel Strategy: A ‘Novelade Stand’ (with free cookies).

Great idea. And she's getting at least some press, which is part of the goal.

It hurts to hear things like that, though -- seven years spent writing a book, and it really does have only a very short window in which to make an impression, especially today. And the literary novel readership is harder to market to, I think.

Lovely DSF email story, Holli!

I'd think so...some of the best ones don't have elevator-pitch thrills and chills.

Thanks, Sox!

Well, I rewrote the query for Defenders and I'm *really* happy with it. It's so much snappier now.

Leah Archer wishes more than anything that she were a special person, a chosen person, magically destined to make a difference in the world. The kind of person she reads about.

She's not. Her bratty little sister is. And the unfairness of it all is driving her nuts.

After helping to cast an accidental spell, one of Leah's friends is kidnapped away to a kingdom caught in a ten-year winter, and Leah and her sister mount a rescue mission. It'd be the fantasy adventure of Leah's dreams-- except it’s dangerous, and scary, and cold. Except that if her sister embraces the magical heritage Leah would give anything to have, Leah might lose her forever.

Leah can’t shake the feeling that she’s nothing more than set dressing in someone else’s story. But she’s determined to find a way to make a difference, no matter what destiny has to say about it.

DEFENDERS OF THE CROWN is a 50,000-word young adult novel. My short stories have appeared in Strange Horizons and Daily Science Fiction, and will soon be featured in Orson Scott Card’s Intergalactic Medicine Show.

Sold a story to Nature Magazine's Futures section today. It was a good day.

Connie, it was great meeting you in person!

You know, if you folks weren't already such awesome writers, I would pimp the hell out of the writing department of my division. They have some really awesome faculty on hand that offer all kinds of critique services and online courses that get rave reviews. If anyone is interested, I'll post links; otherwise, I'll just shut up.

well, you can if you want.Some of us don't have writing-course money, but maybe sometime.

Sold a story to Nature Magazine's Futures section today. It was a good day.

Congrats!

Cog 2 is all outlined with lots of scene synopses. Now all I need to do is write it.