Can't even shout, Can't even cry. The Gentlemen are coming by. Looking in windows, knocking on doors. They need to take seven, and they might take yours. Can't call to mom, can't say a word. You're gonna die screaming but you won't be heard.

Dream Girl ,'Bring On The Night'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Tom Scola - May 21, 2012 8:34:36 am PDT #5303 of 6724
hwæt

Houghton Mifflin files for bankruptcy.


Holli - May 30, 2012 6:56:08 pm PDT #5304 of 6724
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore

Okay, so I've decided to polish up the YA novel I wrote at the end of 2010 and stick it up on the Kindle store. Towards that end, I would love to have a few sets of fresh eyes on it, to point out any major holes or lapses. It's 50k and a pretty quick read. Anyone interested?


Burrell - May 30, 2012 7:17:27 pm PDT #5305 of 6724
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

Gud you are my hero! You went from 0 to 50 with the novel writing!

Um, I'd read it Holli since it's summer and I have time. But I'm not an expert on YA.


Holli - May 30, 2012 7:47:12 pm PDT #5306 of 6724
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore

I just need someone to tell me if it sucks, honestly. Want me to send the gdoc to your profile addy?


Burrell - May 31, 2012 1:38:48 pm PDT #5307 of 6724
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

Sure Holli


Holli - May 31, 2012 3:56:01 pm PDT #5308 of 6724
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore

Okay, sent!


Gudanov - May 31, 2012 5:59:05 pm PDT #5309 of 6724
Coding and Sleeping

I could read it if the time frame is long enough. I've got a bit of a beta-reading queue.

I'm the guest blogger on my agent's blog today :)

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hippocampus - Jun 01, 2012 3:33:26 am PDT #5310 of 6724
not your mom's socks.

Nice, Gud!


Gudanov - Jun 11, 2012 5:41:27 am PDT #5311 of 6724
Coding and Sleeping

I think I have my storylines for Cog and the Copper Dragon. I still need to assemble the story and come up with a more concrete idea of the ending, but I'm liking what I have. I love my character Essy, but I don't think she's going to get a storyline in this book, it's already pretty full. It would be fun to do something with Arla too, but I think she'll have to be content with being an occasional member of Cog's scooby gang when they need some muscle. Cog will have to deal with a dangerous mystery, betrayal, friends at odds with each other, her Papa's scary new girlfriend, turning fourteen, and a boy.

I getting excited about getting up to some more steampunk fun.


Amy - Jun 11, 2012 6:09:35 am PDT #5312 of 6724
Because books.

That's the sequel to Cog, Gud? Nice!

ita posted this in Movies, I think, but it's worth posting here, too: Story rules from Pixar.