A man walks down the street in that hat, people know he's not afraid of anything.

Wash ,'The Message'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Holli - Feb 23, 2012 4:37:33 pm PST #5138 of 6690
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore

Just sent an article proposal to Rookie magazine-- their next theme is 'obsession' and I though How Buffy Summers Got Me Through Adolescence would make a fun essay. We'll see if I get a reply.


Burrell - Feb 23, 2012 4:38:37 pm PST #5139 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

Thanks Amy! I'll send it straight away.


Amy - Feb 23, 2012 4:52:55 pm PST #5140 of 6690
Because books.

Nice, Holli! Good luck.

Got it, Burrell. About to read.


-t - Feb 23, 2012 4:53:25 pm PST #5141 of 6690
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

Very cool, Holli! Good luck.

Good luck to all you submitters - I probably think it more than I type it...


Gudanov - Feb 27, 2012 5:26:35 am PST #5142 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I've lined up some more agents to query. The main thing I need is a shortened synopsis (my current one is about 1200 words), so I've got a little work to do for a couple of them.

Meanwhile I'm starting to assemble the next project, also YA fantasy but a bit more "fantasy" than the last one. I'm calling it Dragonfire at the moment and it's intended to target my daughter's age, twelve. Here's what I've got for a crude "query letter" (if I can't pitch it, then I figure I need to work on the story more, but this will never be an actual query):

Ice-wraiths are sweeping over the world like an all-consuming blizzard, and there is only one wizard who can save the five lands—the wizard twelve-year-old Trine has vowed to stop.

Driven from her home by the invading creatures of the north, Trine finds an inhospitable welcome in the southern lands. Enslaved, she’s forced to work tending to magical creatures destined to slaughter until she happens across a baby dragon. Trine has a way with animals, even savage dragons, and through her new friend she learns why the dragons are being hunted to extinction—they’ve lost their fire.

Trine sets out to restore the dragon’s fire, collecting an unlikely army along the way: a lost elf-child, a failed wizard’s apprentice, an exiled princess with a penchant for tavern brawls, and a dog. The path puts her and her friends up against the most powerful and beloved wizard in all of the five lands along with his army of heroic knights. Of course, she also has to deal with pirates, slavers, and all the kings and queens who see the wizard as their only salvation to hold back the frozen menace from the north.

Nobody wants Trine to succeed and bring back the dangerous beasts' greatest weapon, but if she doesn't, then the world will learn that the dragons have kept much darker and more dangerous creatures than the ice-wraiths at bay. And those forces are already secretly on the move.


Amy - Feb 27, 2012 6:14:09 am PST #5143 of 6690
Because books.

That sounds great, Gud. I like your heroines a lot.

Drabble prompt:

leap


Consuela - Feb 27, 2012 3:16:53 pm PST #5144 of 6690
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

Gud, that looks very fun!


Gudanov - Feb 27, 2012 6:03:14 pm PST #5145 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Thanks. I got the thumbs up from my daughter, so it looks like it'll be a go. As long as she enjoys it, anything else is just gravy.


Amy - Feb 28, 2012 3:42:02 pm PST #5146 of 6690
Because books.

I need a protagonist's name. For once, I have a title, I have the other characters' names, and I have no idea what this girl is called. Going around in circles and coming up blank.

I could pull a Rebecca? No?


Typo Boy - Feb 28, 2012 4:01:39 pm PST #5147 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Tell us a bit about the book, the character and the other characters.