That's a wonderful piece, and so very true.
Do you want a line reading? I found a few things that bug.
Mal: We're still flying. Simon: That's not much. Mal: It's enough.
'Serenity'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Beverly - Feb 18, 2012 12:44:36 pm PST #5106 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Strix - Feb 18, 2012 12:45:34 pm PST #5107 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Yeah, me too. It's my RD, so please, feel free!
And, thank you for the kind feedback, Debet and Bev.
Liese S. - Feb 18, 2012 12:51:41 pm PST #5108 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
Sounds good. I would make sure to check specifically with Shir about the phrasing of her sentence.
Strix - Feb 18, 2012 12:53:20 pm PST #5109 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
That's a good idea. Will do.
Zenkitty - Feb 18, 2012 12:57:36 pm PST #5110 of 6690
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.
Lovely, Erin.
Beverly - Feb 18, 2012 1:09:07 pm PST #5111 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Back to your owltet addy, Erin. Fingers crossed it raises some awareness, wins you some new clients, *and* possibly earns a little money.
SailAweigh - Feb 18, 2012 1:22:25 pm PST #5112 of 6690
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
That was really awesome. The next time a shrink tries to tell me that I need more meat space friends, I'll hand him a copy of this.
erikaj - Feb 18, 2012 2:24:11 pm PST #5113 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
I know that my social workers think I made y'all up.
Burrell - Feb 18, 2012 2:45:22 pm PST #5114 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
That's a wonderful piece, and so very true.
What she said, that Bev.
Zenkitty - Feb 18, 2012 3:18:00 pm PST #5115 of 6690
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.
I know that my social workers think I made y'all up.
There has to be a way to prove our existence to the unbelievers, without directly exposing them to the deadly brightness of the Board.