Wash: Little River just gets more colorful by the moment. What'll she do next? Zoe: Either blow us all up or rub soup in our hair. It's a toss-up. Wash: I hope she does the soup thing. It's always a hoot, and we don't all die from it.

'Objects In Space'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - Aug 07, 2008 10:47:03 am PDT #505 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Thanks Sail and Deena. I like it though I'm not quite sure I truly conveyed the psychedelic eldritch feel of the dream.


Wolfram - Aug 07, 2008 1:35:38 pm PDT #506 of 6681
Visilurking

Typo, I love the way you write. It reminds me a little of Zelazny, and I mean that as a huge compliment.

Sorry I've been lax on the challenges, but this one popped into my head - don't know why.

The First

It had taken me months to finally talk to the bus stop man - to Leonard Fitzroy Cooper - such a delectable name. Leonard was delighted to have the conversation. So many just ignored him and his delicious cardboard sign. Although I was too embarrassed to accept his shoe shine offer, I listened and savored his many stories.

It took three invitations before Leonard brought his sign upstairs. I wonder if he knew I didn’t need the “will work” part. Don’t worry - he felt no pain. As you well know, I enjoyed all my first meals post-mortem.


Susan W. - Aug 07, 2008 3:14:20 pm PDT #507 of 6681
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

It's time for another edition of Name That Character!

Which of these last names, in your opinion, best meets the following criteria: 1) sounds strong and attractive, and 2) sounds like it should be preceded by "of the Boston" (this is for a fictional family of Boston VIPs with roots going back to Puritan days)

Barlow
Bonfield
Foster
Gardner
Hawkins
Lyons
Mayes
Morgan


Susan W. - Aug 07, 2008 3:15:45 pm PDT #508 of 6681
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Ooh, that's chilling, Wolfram.


SailAweigh - Aug 07, 2008 3:22:15 pm PDT #509 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I do like that Wolfram. I like the way you always manage to put a bit of horror/scifi into the mix.

Susan, my eyes stopped at Barlow. All the other names seemed like second best after that one.


Wolfram - Aug 07, 2008 4:30:15 pm PDT #510 of 6681
Visilurking

Thanks guys. Comes from growing up on lots of King, Koontz and Barker.

For strong and attractive I like Morgan and Lyons, though the latter may be too on-the-nose.


Typo Boy - Aug 07, 2008 4:55:41 pm PDT #511 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Wolfram, the twist got to me. Here was this nice guy making friends with a homeless person, and the boom! Vampire or Ghoul or Serial Killer or whatever. Total shock.

Susan - I'm with Sail on "of the Boston Barlows". Nothing else works as well for me.


Typo Boy - Aug 07, 2008 5:04:46 pm PDT #512 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

And for "strong and attractive choose a good first name:

Bernard
Baron
Ben
Blaise
Blaine
Boaz
Bredan/Brendon
Bradford
Brice/Bryce
Bryan/Brian
Bruce


Wolfram - Aug 07, 2008 5:14:05 pm PDT #513 of 6681
Visilurking

Wolfram, the twist got to me. Here was this nice guy making friends with a homeless person, and the boom! Vampire or Ghoul or Serial Killer or whatever. Total shock.

Thanks. I actually started with run-of-the-mill serial killer/cannibal, but I like the vampire or ghoul thing better. Also, I was coy on the killer's gender, but I thought a woman would be more interesting. Was the "will work" pun too obscure?


Ginger - Aug 07, 2008 5:14:25 pm PDT #514 of 6681
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Gardner actually is an old Boston name.