Funny thing about black and white. You mix it together and you get gray. And it doesn't matter how much white you try and put back in, you're never gonna get anything but gray.

Lilah ,'Destiny'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Typo Boy - Aug 07, 2008 10:47:03 am PDT #505 of 6706
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Thanks Sail and Deena. I like it though I'm not quite sure I truly conveyed the psychedelic eldritch feel of the dream.


Wolfram - Aug 07, 2008 1:35:38 pm PDT #506 of 6706
Visilurking

Typo, I love the way you write. It reminds me a little of Zelazny, and I mean that as a huge compliment.

Sorry I've been lax on the challenges, but this one popped into my head - don't know why.

The First

It had taken me months to finally talk to the bus stop man - to Leonard Fitzroy Cooper - such a delectable name. Leonard was delighted to have the conversation. So many just ignored him and his delicious cardboard sign. Although I was too embarrassed to accept his shoe shine offer, I listened and savored his many stories.

It took three invitations before Leonard brought his sign upstairs. I wonder if he knew I didn’t need the “will work” part. Don’t worry - he felt no pain. As you well know, I enjoyed all my first meals post-mortem.


Susan W. - Aug 07, 2008 3:14:20 pm PDT #507 of 6706
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

It's time for another edition of Name That Character!

Which of these last names, in your opinion, best meets the following criteria: 1) sounds strong and attractive, and 2) sounds like it should be preceded by "of the Boston" (this is for a fictional family of Boston VIPs with roots going back to Puritan days)

Barlow
Bonfield
Foster
Gardner
Hawkins
Lyons
Mayes
Morgan


Susan W. - Aug 07, 2008 3:15:45 pm PDT #508 of 6706
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Ooh, that's chilling, Wolfram.


SailAweigh - Aug 07, 2008 3:22:15 pm PDT #509 of 6706
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

I do like that Wolfram. I like the way you always manage to put a bit of horror/scifi into the mix.

Susan, my eyes stopped at Barlow. All the other names seemed like second best after that one.


Wolfram - Aug 07, 2008 4:30:15 pm PDT #510 of 6706
Visilurking

Thanks guys. Comes from growing up on lots of King, Koontz and Barker.

For strong and attractive I like Morgan and Lyons, though the latter may be too on-the-nose.


Typo Boy - Aug 07, 2008 4:55:41 pm PDT #511 of 6706
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Wolfram, the twist got to me. Here was this nice guy making friends with a homeless person, and the boom! Vampire or Ghoul or Serial Killer or whatever. Total shock.

Susan - I'm with Sail on "of the Boston Barlows". Nothing else works as well for me.


Typo Boy - Aug 07, 2008 5:04:46 pm PDT #512 of 6706
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

And for "strong and attractive choose a good first name:

Bernard
Baron
Ben
Blaise
Blaine
Boaz
Bredan/Brendon
Bradford
Brice/Bryce
Bryan/Brian
Bruce


Wolfram - Aug 07, 2008 5:14:05 pm PDT #513 of 6706
Visilurking

Wolfram, the twist got to me. Here was this nice guy making friends with a homeless person, and the boom! Vampire or Ghoul or Serial Killer or whatever. Total shock.

Thanks. I actually started with run-of-the-mill serial killer/cannibal, but I like the vampire or ghoul thing better. Also, I was coy on the killer's gender, but I thought a woman would be more interesting. Was the "will work" pun too obscure?


Ginger - Aug 07, 2008 5:14:25 pm PDT #514 of 6706
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Gardner actually is an old Boston name.