good for you, Susan!
Some people juggle geese!
Wash ,'Our Mrs. Reynolds'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Burrell - Aug 01, 2008 7:45:04 pm PDT #461 of 6681
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
sarameg - Aug 03, 2008 5:18:28 pm PDT #462 of 6681
Nice, Susan!
Ginger, I shared your poetry with my mom and she liked it a lot. THEN, she adapted it to apply to my brother. I hope you don't mind.
Adapted from a poem by Ginger
Car Parts
The new shelves are measured, they're empty and neat.
They're measured in inches, they're measured in feet.
The movers have measured in boxes and pounds,
But car parts still pile up in undignified mounds.
They capture the table,
They conquer the floor.
They have to be shifted to open the door.
From now on I'll be good, I'll learn to be tough.
A garage lined with metal shelves is surely enough.
One engine, two clutches, three boxes from parts fairs.
Car parts climb off the shelves and head for the stairs.
Though I’ve looked and I’ve looked,
There’s one thing that's certain:
The most needed part this job requires,
Cannot even be found in my mountain of tires!
(It totally cracked me up. He is to car parts what the rest of my family is to books.)
Lee - Aug 03, 2008 5:23:24 pm PDT #463 of 6681
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
Both Ginger's original and your mom's version are great!
The Shelf space challenge is now closed.
The new challenge is polish.
lisah - Aug 04, 2008 6:02:21 am PDT #464 of 6681
Punishingly Intricate
So, um, not sure about the etiquette of asking for a beta, but I have a partial draft of a story I'm working on and I've hit well, not an impass, but a point at which I need to decide what to do next. As in, is this a short story? a novella? If someone is willing to read it, I'd be grateful.
Burrell, if you still need readers I'd be happy to help.
Atropa - Aug 04, 2008 4:10:53 pm PDT #465 of 6681
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.
takes a deep breath
I finished the first draft of my book. Next up, reading the feedback from my beta readers, and polishing. But the first draft is DONE.
SailAweigh - Aug 04, 2008 4:12:14 pm PDT #466 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Whoohoo, Jilli! That is awesome!
Barb - Aug 04, 2008 4:12:54 pm PDT #467 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”
Wheeeeee, Jilli!
I know I owe you scads of feedback, but actually, I think this is going to be good-- I'm going to read in order, beginning to end and give you overall impression. Is that good?
Atropa - Aug 04, 2008 4:20:30 pm PDT #468 of 6681
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.
Barb, that would be perfect.
Connie Neil - Aug 04, 2008 4:48:08 pm PDT #469 of 6681
brillig
Yay, Jilli! I loved the plug you did for the book in your interview!
sj - Aug 04, 2008 4:53:54 pm PDT #470 of 6681
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."
Yay, Jilli!