I kissed him, and I told him that I loved him. And I killed him.

Buffy ,'Same Time, Same Place'


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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


hippocampus - Aug 03, 2011 3:43:37 am PDT #4537 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

Gud - Insent. I don't want you to be slammed.


Strix - Aug 03, 2011 6:08:46 am PDT #4538 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

I'd offer to beta stuff -- next week, though, so this offer might now work.

ION, I am blogging once a day on "Fiction" and it's kicking my ass. But it's like windsprints, except for no running (thank you jesus.)

Yesterday's post was finished at 1:30 am, so it's a little slap-happy, but I am grimly determined to pump out something every day for August. I WILL WRITESERVERE!

It's the top ten ways to make your novel a wallbanger - you know, thrown across the room in disgust: [link]


Toddson - Aug 03, 2011 7:01:54 am PDT #4539 of 6690
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

verb tenses that time-travel more than a Diana Gabaldon heroine

snerk


Gudanov - Aug 03, 2011 7:15:05 am PDT #4540 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

You've actually run into a published book where a character got referred to by a different names? That seems like a pretty big slip-up.

I came across a place in my rough draft where for one scene I used a completely different name for a character (as opposed to just a different spelling, which, um, I'm discovering needs some work). I was kinda horrified that I did that.


Toddson - Aug 03, 2011 7:30:45 am PDT #4541 of 6690
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

It happens. A lot of people aren't as careful and it seems copy editors should be on the endangered list.

On All About Romance a book was once given an F- grade - it was a western and the hero rode in on a stallion and out on a gelding.


Gudanov - Aug 03, 2011 7:41:07 am PDT #4542 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

it was a western and the hero rode in on a stallion and out on a gelding.

Well, it's more believable than the other way around.


Toddson - Aug 03, 2011 7:42:56 am PDT #4543 of 6690
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

The reviewers comment: "poor horsie!"


Strix - Aug 03, 2011 9:33:31 am PDT #4544 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Heh, thanks, Toddson! But copy editors should be on the endangered list -- not ALL of us!!

Gud, You've actually run into a published book where a character got referred to by a different names? That seems like a pretty big slip-up.

A couple of times, actually -- don't ask for cites, but now, of course it'll drive me crazy till I can remember!

And I totally get draft slip-ups -- that's natural, and why multiple eyes are so important.

But when massive errors make it past writers, editors, line edits and copyeditors, it sets me hissing like an affronted cat.


Typo Boy - Aug 03, 2011 10:46:50 am PDT #4545 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

You've actually run into a published book where a character got referred to by a different names?

See also 19th century Russian novels.


Volans - Aug 03, 2011 11:13:41 am PDT #4546 of 6690
move out and draw fire

One of the ones I remember was a Sookie Stackhouse book. I can't remember the character's name, some dude in town, but his facial hair was described in detail and his last name was Hunter.

About 2/3 of the way in, his first name suddenly changed from Bob or whatever to "Catfish."

So I figured she'd been basing the character on Catfish Hunter and hadn't caught all the uses of the name with global search-and-replace.