Rough draft of Cog is done. Now for the fixing up stage. I already changed a couple of character names.
I walk. I talk. I shop, I sneeze. I'm gonna be a fireman when the floods roll back. There's trees in the desert since you moved out. And I don't sleep on a bed of bones.
Buffy ,'Chosen'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Gudanov - Jul 17, 2011 5:25:13 pm PDT #4476 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Strix - Jul 17, 2011 6:32:08 pm PDT #4477 of 6690
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Thanks, Barb! I appreciate it muchly. I have gotten 8 entries and 3 subscriptions to the newsletter -- woo!
YAY, Gud, on RD being done!
hippocampus - Jul 18, 2011 4:40:02 am PDT #4478 of 6690
not your mom's socks.
Awesome Gud!
Laga - Jul 18, 2011 6:18:38 am PDT #4479 of 6690
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.
Go Gud!
Gudanov - Jul 18, 2011 6:37:50 am PDT #4480 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I need to send you an updated draft, Sox. Not that it matters until chapter 28.
hippocampus - Jul 18, 2011 8:16:12 am PDT #4481 of 6690
not your mom's socks.
cool - send it when you're ready Gud.
sj - Jul 18, 2011 8:21:04 am PDT #4482 of 6690
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."
Yay, Gud!
Gudanov - Jul 19, 2011 5:53:56 am PDT #4483 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
One thing I've learned from younger beta readers is that they don't know what an airship is. Must beef up the description of the airship in the story, The Birkenhead.
hippocampus - Jul 19, 2011 5:59:54 am PDT #4484 of 6690
not your mom's socks.
they don't know what an airship is.
Kids these days.
Amy - Jul 19, 2011 6:38:54 am PDT #4485 of 6690
Because books.
If anyone wants to play, and you've read Cold Kiss, can you give me three words to describe Wren, and then Gabriel?
It's for an interview question, and I'm having a hard time getting down to three.