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The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

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Strix - May 19, 2011 3:29:10 pm PDT #4398 of 6718
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Yeah, the sentence you mentioned was giving me fits, and ITA agree about the first section of the essay. I love the latter half -- that's where is gels, I think -- but the beginning is where I started noodling and ended up with my metaphor going where I wanted it.

Fabulous. I thought I needed to re-work the beginning. I'm gonna let it sit for a bit, and toy with it -- I have to learn how to write a query letter first, anyway! And my brane is ded today, anyway.

Thanks for the feedback!

Amy - May 19, 2011 5:01:59 pm PDT #4399 of 6718
Because books.

Glad to help, babe! It's a great piece.

Strix - May 19, 2011 5:24:19 pm PDT #4400 of 6718
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Woo! Let's hope someone gives me filthy lucre for it eventually. After revisions.

Brane still ded. Going to bed early tonight

Amy - May 24, 2011 11:38:42 am PDT #4401 of 6718
Because books.

This was definitely a surprise to see in my editor's tweets. Yikes!

Beverly - May 24, 2011 11:40:00 am PDT #4402 of 6718
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Amy, \\o/!

Strix - May 24, 2011 1:03:59 pm PDT #4403 of 6718
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

Yay!! (And I want those earrings.)

Liese S. - May 24, 2011 1:42:41 pm PDT #4404 of 6718
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Super yay! And yeah, that's a gorgeous photo.

Anne W. - May 24, 2011 1:48:56 pm PDT #4405 of 6718
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Awesome!

Amy - May 24, 2011 2:44:36 pm PDT #4406 of 6718
Because books.

Aw, thank you. I think I look sort of pinched and wan there, but it's better than most pictures of me!

The earrings were H&M a couple years back, and I LOVE them. I have a matching necklace!

Strix - May 24, 2011 3:43:58 pm PDT #4407 of 6718
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

pinched and wan

I think you mean a writerly pale and aesthete...

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