I fell down and got confused. Willow fixed me. She's gay.

BuffyBot ,'Dirty Girls'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Dec 09, 2010 5:21:15 pm PST #3771 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

Four days into my misadventure with Twilight, I now hate both main characters.


Amy - Dec 09, 2010 5:37:49 pm PST #3772 of 6705
Because books.

Like all right-thinking people, Gud.


Anne W. - Dec 09, 2010 5:46:05 pm PST #3773 of 6705
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I'm just surprised it took you that long.


Barb - Dec 09, 2010 6:18:35 pm PST #3774 of 6705
“Not dead yet!”

Dittoing Amy and Anne.


sumi - Dec 10, 2010 5:31:01 am PST #3775 of 6705
Art Crawl!!!

So very true.

And I hate them from the movies because despite my friends' inexplicable fondness for the books, I have managed to avoid them.


Gudanov - Dec 10, 2010 5:37:35 am PST #3776 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

After the disaster of yesterday's commute, this morning's wasn't too terrible. There are flashes of okay-ness.


Typo Boy - Dec 10, 2010 2:26:25 pm PST #3777 of 6705
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

If I'm recommend an entire book on a particular subject inside the MS I'm writing further discussion of a topic (as opposed to citing particular pages to prove a point) and I mention the title and author in the text is there any need to add a formal citation? I do make extensive use of formal citations in the work, so maybe not citing is inconsistent?


Barb - Dec 10, 2010 2:29:13 pm PST #3778 of 6705
“Not dead yet!”

I'd go ahead and cite it, TB and then if it turns out it's unnecessary, it can be removed in copyedits.


Gudanov - Dec 13, 2010 9:40:00 am PST #3779 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

I'm very close to finishing my current revision. Then it's just clean-up, not a minor task, but the novel is definitely winding down.

I also wrote the 1st draft of the first chapter of my next novel.

Meanwhile I continue my commuting misadventure. Chapter 6 wasn't bad actually. Chapter 7 though ::shakes head::. I think this morning was an actual account of the author's researching of vampires of this book. It was like reading the narrative of someone reading a Wikipedia article. This was right after a though description of eating a bowl of cereal. Why are you detailing this mundane crap for the reader? Oh, god why?


Gudanov - Dec 14, 2010 5:44:50 am PST #3780 of 6705
Coding and Sleeping

I realized I can keep cleaning up chapters after the first few are scrubbed down. So very soon, I expect at the beginning of the year, I'll be moving along to synopsis writing and query letter making. Rejection time is closing in fast.