Probably using the word "stupid" in the title is a bad idea. But I realized that diverting military spending to clean energy is really kind of core. Only place to get the level of public spending needed.
'Just Rewards (2)'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
What about some take on "They will beat their swords into plowshares and their spears into pruning hooks. Nation will not take up sword against nation, nor will they train for war anymore."?
Swords into Windmills: How Waging War on Climate Change Will Make Us Safer and Richer
Yes. that is a good suggestion. Can people keep ideas coming? I don't know what my editor really wants so I'm planning to throw a lot of titles at her and see if one of them sticks.
My slight modification
Swords into Windmills: How Clean Energy Will Make Us Safer, Richer and Healthier than Dirty Wars
I like Fevered Planet.
So do I but the Editor doesn't. Once I've sold them on buying the book I can try to talk them into a better title. My current thought.
Clean energy, not dirty wars: How diverting military spending into clean energy can make America Safer, richer and healthier.
Do you need to get the war thing into the title? Is that more important to you than the issue of market-driven reforms? I ask because your argument sounds like the reforms issue was more central, but you seem to be dropping that from your title now.
Not sure. I mean both important. Market tinkering won't solve the problem. Large scale public investment will, really large scale. IN theory we could get the money other places than cutting military spending - taxes on the rich and so on. But in practice I think a lot of has to come from cutting the military for various reasons. So: don't know. The thing is too much to really fit in a title. So don't know what shouuld be in the title.
I like your initial suggestion of Windmills, Not Weapons, TB, simply because of the alliteration. Regardless of who you expect this book to sell to, you have to sell this to marketing/committee first. And they like catchy. And no, what they like is not always in line with what people out in the Real World are going to like. (Keep in mind, the same kind of people who thought "Light my Fuego" was a fabulous title for what ultimately became Adiós to My Old Life. IJS.)
Anyhow, they like things they imagine are liable to jump out at the book buyers for the accounts. Alliteration is always a good bet.
Seriously. Try not to think like a writer—think like a marketer.
of the current choices, I like Windmills not Weapons too although my instinct for titles is not all that...a few weeks ago, I just managed a "didn't hate it," from EQ. Keep the part after the semicolon short, if you can.