I had a whole section about civic pride.

Mayor ,'Chosen'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


dcp - May 13, 2010 6:43:13 pm PDT #3351 of 6693
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.

What is the connection between the things on either side of the semicolon? The ruins of the past are located in the Wild?


Amy - May 13, 2010 6:45:36 pm PDT #3352 of 6693
Because books.

A semi-colon joins two related sentences that could stand alone.

"I went to the supermarket; Jane went to the drug store."

For instance.


Gudanov - May 13, 2010 7:36:06 pm PDT #3353 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

The ruins of the past are located in the Wild?

Yes


Gudanov - May 13, 2010 7:36:14 pm PDT #3354 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

Thanks. I wasn't sure about attributing the author and book, completely made up as they are.


Gudanov - May 14, 2010 6:00:02 am PDT #3355 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

I cleaned up chapter 1 to post on a site where I do some critiquing for others. Everytime I look at it, there seems to be new nits to fix.

I also had to bang out a description which I didn't spend much time on since it was getting late. However, it was kind of fun to make one up.

A Crafter working for the Imperial Guard, Aimee Fallon was only expected to operate a Flyer to transport soldiers to deal with a demon spotting. She thought she would skirt around her orders to test her new invention against a real demon.

Her decision sets off a chain of events that makes her a fugitive wanted by Church and State. Aimee must follow her mentor out of the saftey of the Barrier-protected Empire, and into the Wild, a realm populated by demons and the savage, tattooed Fari warriors. Along the way, she discovers she may be the only person who can defeat the power of the Dead Mountain and save humanity from extinction.

Tonight I need to get back to basic cutting once again.


erikaj - May 14, 2010 8:33:00 am PDT #3356 of 6693
Always Anti-fascist!

safety is "ety" Although my spelling chops aren't what they used to be.


Gudanov - May 14, 2010 8:39:45 am PDT #3357 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

Oops, well, I did bang it out pretty fast.


erikaj - May 14, 2010 9:02:51 am PDT #3358 of 6693
Always Anti-fascist!

That's what she said.


Amy - May 14, 2010 11:41:25 am PDT #3359 of 6693
Because books.

I turned my book in! Only ... ::checks:: ... six weeks late, but with my editor's blessing!

::collapses::


Gudanov - May 14, 2010 11:47:15 am PDT #3360 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping

Congrats, Amy!