Of course, now his body is going to leach lead into the environment.
You know, I just... I woke up, and I looked in the mirror, and I thought, hey, what's with all the sin? I need to change. I'm... I'm dirty. I'm, I'm bad with the... sex and the envy and that, that loud music us kids listen to nowadays.
Buffy ,'Lessons'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Ginger - May 09, 2010 3:26:23 pm PDT #3322 of 6693
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
Burrell - May 09, 2010 3:32:22 pm PDT #3323 of 6693
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
snerk
Gudanov - May 10, 2010 6:11:11 am PDT #3324 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
Funny piece, but I'm sorry about the frustration, Typo Boy.
Typo Boy - May 10, 2010 6:32:26 am PDT #3325 of 6693
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.
Thanks. Laughing at it helps a lot. And after all, I'm involved voluntarily.
Gudanov - May 10, 2010 7:01:20 am PDT #3326 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
I'm in Chapter 13 of my cutting run and I'm down about 7500 words. Or roughly a quarter of the words so far. I feel like I should apologize to my beta readers for having them read such an excess of unnecessary text.
Typo Boy - May 10, 2010 8:20:35 am PDT #3327 of 6693
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.
Hey, its a valid writing method. Produce a lot of words that include what you want to say and then pare them away the way a sculptor pares away clay until they say what you want to say well.
Gudanov - May 10, 2010 8:48:37 am PDT #3328 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
It's certainly going to be all the better for trying to pare down the word count as much as I can.
Tom Scola - May 10, 2010 10:08:35 am PDT #3329 of 6693
Remember that the frontier of the Rebellion is everywhere. And even the smallest act of insurrection pushes our lines forward.
Gudanov - May 11, 2010 5:36:17 am PDT #3330 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
Did the usual stuff and squeezed out more words. I need to start moving along a little quicker if I'm ever going to get this thing done.
Gudanov - May 11, 2010 9:31:02 am PDT #3331 of 6693
Coding and Sleeping
I've started having second thoughts about the title. Right now it's "The Dead Mountain" when I had it divided up the second part was "Daughter of my Blood". Both titles are taken from the contents of the book, but I'm starting to think the second one is more dramatic. Anyhow, my favorite idea, "Aimee's Awesome Adventure" probably isn't the best even if it's an alliteration.