My wife found a big mistake in chapter 6, something totally implausible. I can't believe I didn't think of it, but then I changed things from the rough draft so I think the scene used to be plausible. I'm glad she caught it though. She loves to catch stuff like that.
Speaking of plausibility. I listened to an Atlanta airport scene in my Lee Child audio book. I don't know the Atlanta airport, but I totally didn't buy the scene regardless. The book is still a good listen, I just had to shrug off that scene.
Um, anyone interested in reading a short (2K words) of the New Project?
It's not at any kind of needing critique stage yet-- just more a general impressions sort of thing, especially since it's such a new beast for me.
I am, Barb. Assuming you don't need super fast turnaround (ie - it might have to wait until this evening).
I could do it this weekend.
I can do it later this evening, Barb.
Nope, no hurry necessary. I'll send shortly.
Chipped off a bit more of 60, it's already an unusually large chapter and there is still plenty to happen. Dang, I was hoping to be done with this revision about now.
If you need more eyes, I'm there for you, Barb.
Got it, babe! I'll send you my impressions tonight or tomorrow morning.
