Hermanos! The devil has built a robot!

Numero Cinco ,'The Cautionary Tale of Numero Cinco'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Liese S. - Jan 14, 2010 1:15:12 pm PST #3008 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yes, single spaced. Okay, thank you. And he's verbose, so I'll tell him 400 and get probably 600, and then I can add the second page if necessary given the photos. But I'm not telling him it's an option.

I love him a bunch, but he's cracking me up. I finally wrote him a big note and gave him a deadline, some expectations, and an outline. It's the only way he'll get it done. And he wants to get it done! People will give him more money! He already missed last quarter's newsletter. By the time he gets it done, he'll be back in Tuva!

Thanks!


Gudanov - Jan 15, 2010 5:24:39 am PST #3009 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Making more progress on 45, while trying to decide what to have in there and what not. There's a scene I like, but there appears to be no place for it the way I'm rewriting this part. Maybe it can fit into a later chapter, maybe not. In any event, I'm getting through the things that must happen plot-wise and character-wise.


Gudanov - Jan 19, 2010 5:23:36 am PST #3010 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Just some fixing up to do on 45 and 46 and I'll be digging in on 47. I'm not sure about 46, but this isn't the last version so I'm not going to fret about it too much now. I'll see what beta readers think when they get there.

I'm expecting 55 chapters so I'm just nine chapters away from the end of this revision. I sure hope the next revision doesn't take as long, I don't plan to rewrite everything so I don't think it will.


Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Jan 19, 2010 11:51:26 pm PST #3011 of 6690
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"

Working on having the calm of a Zen master and the patience of a saint over losing most of the work I did on my book review yesterday.

Did I mention that all computers must die?


erikaj - Jan 20, 2010 4:34:00 am PST #3012 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

wrod.


Amy - Jan 20, 2010 4:36:58 am PST #3013 of 6690
Because books.

Oh, Seska. Ouch.


Gudanov - Jan 20, 2010 5:09:18 am PST #3014 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Ugh, sorry to hear that.


Gudanov - Jan 20, 2010 5:48:45 am PST #3015 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I got done with 45 and 46. That makes it 9 chapters left in my estimation. Closing in. A lot happens in these final chapters.


Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Jan 20, 2010 7:40:15 am PST #3016 of 6690
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"

I think I scraped most of it out of my head and back onto the page this afternoon.

Good luck on the home stretch, Gud!


Gudanov - Jan 21, 2010 6:10:50 am PST #3017 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Got a start on 47. This is a complete rewrite part so it's going a bit slower.