I need to do some minor cleaning of 39 and then it'll be in the bag. I've started 40 as well. Things are chugging along.

I think I'm going to have to do some cutting in the first part of the book, things may go a little too slow in places.

I felt sort of like a dork as I was getting misty writing the end (well, not the very end) of 38 and the beginning of 40. It's not that the writing is so moving it's just that I can see it in my head so well. Now, if I get could just get the vivid image on paper.

I hope the constant updates aren't annoying. I'm still a long ways from being done.

Aww, it's not dorky to love what you write! It rocks that it evokes that strong a reaction from you.

Not annoyed at all by the updates. I'm glad to see you working.

Anyone interested in a drabble topic? Snow, or White, or any combination thereof

Entertaining, not annoying.

39 and 40 are done. I've barely started 41, this is an area of the rough draft I need to shrink down some. I think I made a good call in 40 where I cut a lot from the rough draft. It wasn't all that interesting anyhow.

I've dug into 41 now and have gotten through the opening fight. Now for the flight, and a couple of complications before going onto 42.

I think I have a definite plan for shortening the beginning though it may only net me about 5,000 words or so. Maybe I can cut a little from chapter 12 and 13 as well and get another 2,000 words or so. After that, I'm not sure, there is so much interdependency.

The other plan would be to slow things down and give more detail while going to a two book solution. I'd have to juice up the plot in the beginning half though since it was never meant to be complete story.

As I'm coming to the end of my audio book, I'm starting to understand why not much happens a good way through the book. The book is not meant to stand alone, it looks to be ending with a non-concluding conclusion. Kind of disappointing because it's around the size I'm shooting for and I wanted to see how a fantasy genre book handled plotting and detail within that word count. The answer in this case is that it didn't. The writing is good through, good enough that I don't notice it anyhow.

Oh, the David Eddings book? Yeah, there's five of those.

I knew it was a series, but I figured that the first book at least would have some sort of conclusion, but apparently not. There also appears to be a massive plot hole, but since the first book really is just an opening, maybe it's addressed later on.

Anyhow, on to the next audiobook I have checked out. The Golden Compass. I've got nothing in the hopper after that, so I'll have to see what they've got available for download.

Still on 41, still in the fleeing for lives part of the chapter. I should move on to the complication part of the chapter, then onto 42. I had another close call in the rough draft, but it doesn't feel necessary so it goes into the waste bin.