Who died and made you Elvis?

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The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


SailAweigh - Jun 15, 2008 10:56:27 am PDT #272 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

For the green challenge. I've been meaning to get this on paper since my drive home on Friday. The weather inspired me. This is pretty dark, so read at your own risk.

Green-eyed Monster

I'd learned to be as patient as any cat by a mouse hole. I'd had cats, but had to kill them when the canned goods ran out. They could find their own food, which was the problem. The vermin that sought out high ground as the flooding spread were easy pickings for my cats, but they weren't good at sharing. I'd had dinner that lasted more than a week for me. Now, it was my turn to crouch next to the hole in the green, mold-covered wall. Until it quit raining or the water finally breached the condo, I'd eat.


Beverly - Jun 15, 2008 1:00:55 pm PDT #273 of 6681
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Yup. Dark. Remind me not to room with Sail next time there's a get-together, hmmm?


Ginger - Jun 15, 2008 1:48:20 pm PDT #274 of 6681
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

It's been raining waaay too long in Wisconsin.


SailAweigh - Jun 15, 2008 1:53:10 pm PDT #275 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

My drive home on Friday just left me too much time to think. I should start writing post-Apocalyptic fiction. Brrrr.


Toddson - Jun 16, 2008 6:22:10 am PDT #276 of 6681
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

Beverly, you'd probably be safe rooming with Sail (but bring lots of snacks, just in case).


Laura - Jun 16, 2008 9:22:41 am PDT #277 of 6681
Our wings are not tired.

I should start writing post-Apocalyptic fiction.

Yes you should. And eeep!


Wolfram - Jun 16, 2008 9:58:46 am PDT #278 of 6681
Visilurking

Creepy, Sail. I like.

Also liked Sox's stuff from way back. Please keep with the writing good.


Susan W. - Jun 16, 2008 1:24:32 pm PDT #279 of 6681
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

So...I know every writer has a different process, what works for one would make another's muse desert her, etc.

But after my first manuscript, I vowed that I would never, ever write out of order again, since I think writing whatever scene came to mind and stitching them together into a whole later slowed me down and generally made the book sloppier.

So I've been writing linearly ever since. Only now I've reached a point in the WIP where the End itself is in sight, but the path from here to there isn't. And I'm wondering if this is the right time to break my own rule and skip ahead to my Big Epic Battle Scene that closes the story, in hopes that fleshing it out and getting all the drama and angst and death and courage and manly warrior bonding onto the page will show me what I need to do to get my characters to that point. Because right now I'm flailing my way through the ms and writing tons of boring filler.

So, yeah, I'm mostly talking myself into doing something I've already made up my mind about, but does that sound sensible?


Typo Boy - Jun 16, 2008 4:23:15 pm PDT #280 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Uh yeah, it makes sense. Susan, generally your self-imposed rules shouldn't be that absolute. Except when they should.


Typo Boy - Jun 16, 2008 4:25:15 pm PDT #281 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

And skipping the part you are stuck on and moving on and getting the part you have already figured out is a basic part of the writing process for most people. Maybe you need to do less of it than average, but it would surprise me if you could avoid entirely.