Funny thing about black and white. You mix it together and you get gray. And it doesn't matter how much white you try and put back in, you're never gonna get anything but gray.

Lilah ,'Destiny'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Oct 20, 2009 5:17:20 am PDT #2559 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping

Still working on 21 and 22, but almost done. I had my wife look at 22 and she pointed out a place where Aimee's emotions aren't complex enough and she's right, so some fixing will be needed.

The listening is revealing that I need to do tightening and rephrasing pretty badly. Nonetheless, I'm feeling a bit encouraged, it seems like the story and characters are going along okay. The characters probably need a bit more work, but they aren't terrible to my ear. I already knew that I needed to work on tightening and rephrasing, so that doesn't seem all that bad.


Amy - Oct 20, 2009 2:56:57 pm PDT #2560 of 6734
Because books.

So I took a nap this afternoon and missed a call from my agent. And she never calls unless she has news, which in this case is probably X Publisher likes the zombie book, or X Publisher passed on it. And now I have to wait till tomorrow to find out which it is.

Learn from me, people! Don't nap!


Barb - Oct 20, 2009 3:18:26 pm PDT #2561 of 6734
“Not dead yet!”

And she didn't leave a MESSAGE? Or email or SOMETHING??

AUGH.


Amy - Oct 20, 2009 3:19:45 pm PDT #2562 of 6734
Because books.

No, she left a message. Said to call her tomorrow.


Barb - Oct 20, 2009 3:23:36 pm PDT #2563 of 6734
“Not dead yet!”

No, she left a message. Said to call her tomorrow.

And I repeat, AUGH.


Gudanov - Oct 20, 2009 4:37:28 pm PDT #2564 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping

I wish you good and exciting news.


Anne W. - Oct 20, 2009 4:39:36 pm PDT #2565 of 6734
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Amy, midnight counts as "tomorrow," right? Do you have her home number?


Amy - Oct 20, 2009 5:02:13 pm PDT #2566 of 6734
Because books.

Hee. I think I can wait.

Meanwhile, I went back to my critique group after a couple months away and they completely helped me figure out what I was doing wrong with the new YA idea. I'm never leaving them again!


Gudanov - Oct 20, 2009 5:47:33 pm PDT #2567 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping

And 21 is finally out, 10 days, the house painting is definitely taking a toll on my productivity.


Barb - Oct 20, 2009 5:57:09 pm PDT #2568 of 6734
“Not dead yet!”

Go Gud!

I finished something that's either the first half of a chapter, or the chapter in and of itself. I'll have to see how the next section shakes itself out.