Thanks for the input on my chapter 1 remix. I might use some lines from the experimental version, but I'm still going to start in the same place as I did originally.
Now to extract my newly removed character and spackle up the holes that leaves.
Y'all see the man hanging out of the spaceship with the really big gun? Now I'm not saying you weren't easy to find. It was kinda out of our way, and he didn't want to come in the first place. Man's lookin' to kill some folk. So really it's his will y'all should worry about thwarting.
Mal ,'Safe'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Gudanov - Sep 18, 2009 6:19:16 am PDT #2358 of 6710
Coding and Sleeping
Gudanov - Sep 18, 2009 7:31:20 am PDT #2359 of 6710
Coding and Sleeping
Now for my experiment with chapter 3. A section with a different POV since the character that knows the significance of something is not currently the POV character and would in no way tell the POV character. I think it might work better even though I like to stay primarily with the main character. That's like 7 POVs, main character, new dude, henchman, bad dude, that other guy, another dude, and a another woman, yep 7 distributed throughout. Probably 80-90% is in the main character's POV still.
Beverly - Sep 18, 2009 8:45:58 am PDT #2360 of 6710
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
The dude playin' the dude disguised as another dude?
Gudanov - Sep 18, 2009 8:49:13 am PDT #2361 of 6710
Coding and Sleeping
Clearly
I don't know why I didn't say Aimee, Martin, Rainier, Curtis, Asan'Gareth, Holly, and Avar. I feel oddly reluctant to use names.
dcp - Sep 18, 2009 10:35:58 am PDT #2362 of 6710
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.
::gestures vaguely::
Interested, but reluctant to commit.
Sigh. Way to reinforce the stereotype, dcp.
Deena - Sep 18, 2009 3:31:58 pm PDT #2363 of 6710
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Hand!
May I do the cover art?
SailAweigh - Sep 18, 2009 3:40:36 pm PDT #2364 of 6710
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I, for one, would love to have you do the cover, Deena. You do beautiful artwork.
Amy - Sep 18, 2009 3:42:33 pm PDT #2365 of 6710
Because books.
God, me too. And you'll write something, yes?
Amy - Sep 18, 2009 3:47:26 pm PDT #2366 of 6710
Because books.
Also, that's 22 people I counted who are interested. Three of those want to help with editing or production rather than writing.
dcp, I didn't include you, but if you write something when we finally come to some sort of decision about what and when, please feel free to send it in.
Deena - Sep 18, 2009 3:47:33 pm PDT #2367 of 6710
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Yes, most happily.